题目内容

8．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一题做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划对号：如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下面情况改正：
    此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．
    此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
    此行错一词：在错词的下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
I will share with you a true story happened a couple                   （76）story后加that/which或将happened改为happening
of days ago．One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks      （77）classmates
from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to          （78）√
enjoy snacks．Unluckily，all of then got poisoned and             （79）enjoy后加the
had stomachaches with our faces pale．They were quickly        （80）their
sent to a nearby hospital．Doctors examine them and                （81）examined
gave them some medicine．They out of dangerous                    （82）danger
soon before taking the medicine．This accident should             （83）after
make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem．（84）去掉realize之前的to
I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more．               （85）pay．

分析 本文作者通过讲述发生在自己身边的关于食品中毒的真实故事，旨在呼吁全社会都来关注食品安全问题．

解答 I will share with you a true story∧ happened a couple                （76）story后加that/which或将happened改为happening
of days ago．One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks         （77）classmates
from a food store．A few roommates were then invited to           （78）√
enjoy∧snacks．Unluckily，all of them got poisoned and             （79）enjoy后加the
had stomachaches with our faces pale．They were quickly          （80）their
sent to a nearby hospital．Doctors examine them and                 （81）examined
gave them some medicine．They out of dangerous                     （82）danger
soon before taking the medicine．This accident should              （83）after
make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem． （84）去掉realize之前的to
I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more．               （85）pay．

答案：
76．story后加that/which或将happened改为happening    考查定语从句或现在分词     本句可以做成定语从句，即：由于先行词story（指物）在该从句中作主语，所以不能省略关系代词，故在story后加that/which；此处还可以改为由分词短语作定语修饰前面的名词story，由于动词happen与该名词构成了逻辑上的主谓关系，故用happening；故答案为：story后加that/which或将happened改为happening
77．将classmate改为classmates   考查名词的单复数   这里指的是：我（众多）同学中的一个，故用名词的复数形式classmates
78．√
79．enjoy后加the   考查冠词   此处用在名词snacks之前，表示特指前面提到的那些零食；故用the
80．将our改为 their    考查句意理解及形容词性的物主代词    本句的意思是：不幸的是，他们都中毒了，他们肚子痛得脸色发白；此处指的是：他们的脸色；故用their
81．将examine改为examined   考查时态   根据文中的时间状语"a couple of days ago"可知，此处指的是：几天前发生的事情，所以应使用一般过去时；故用examined
82．将dangerous改为danger    考查固定短语"out of danger"意为：脱离危险；故用danger
83．将before改为after   考查连词    本句的意思是：在服药后不久，他们就脱离了危险；此处指的是：在…之后，故用after
84．去掉realize之前的to   考查固定结构"make us do sth．"意为：让某人做某事；此处的意思是：这场事故应该让我们认识到了食品安全的严重性；故去掉realize之前的to  
85．将 pays 改为pay    考查主谓一致   本句的意思是：我强烈建议全社会都要给与更多的关注；由于主句中的suggest意为：建议，所以从句应使用虚拟语气，即使用should+动词原形或直接用动词原形；故用pay

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。 温馨提示：注意格式！！！

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Born in 1949, Diana Nyad took an early interest in swimming as a sport and was a Florida State High School swimming champion. Like many young athletes, she had Olympic dreams, but a serious illness kept her from competing in the Games. The disappointment didn’t stop her from going forward. Instead, she became interested in marathon swimming. A brilliant athlete, she was well-conditioned for spending long periods of time in the water. As a long-distance swimmer, she would compete against herself and the obstacles presented by distance, danger, cold, and exhaustion.

For ten years Nyad devoted herself to becoming one of the world’s best long-distance swimmers. In 1970, she swam a ten-mile marathon in Lake Ontario, setting the women’s record for the course. In 1972 she set another record by swimming 102.5 miles from an island in the Bahamas to the coast of Florida. Then she broke a third record when swimming around Manhattan Island in 1975.

Nyad attempted to swim the distance between Florida and Cuba in 1978. Though the span of water is less than 100 miles wide, it is rough and dangerous. After battling the water for two days, she had to give for the sake of her own health and safety. Even so, she impressed the world with her courage and strong desire to succeed. For Nyad her strength of purpose was just as important as reading Cuba. That is how she defined success. It did not matter that her swim came up short; she believed she had touched the other shore.

When Nyad ended her career as a swimmer, she continued to try new things---travelling the world as a reporter, writing books and giving public speeches about her life. Diana Nyad works to inspire others, just as she did when she swam the waters of the world.

1.What prevented Nyad from taking part in the Olympic Games? (No more than 5 words)

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2.What does the underlined word “obstacles” mean? (1 word)

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3.What achievement did Nyad make in 1970? (No more than 10 words.)

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4.Why did Nyad believe that she had touched the other shore? (No more than 10 words)

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5.Please explain how you are inspired by Nyad. (No more than 20 words)

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C．Think in silence．
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61．D
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62．F
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63．E
Answer that e-mail you need to get to．You know which one I'm talking about：that e-mail that you know is crying out for a response．Maybe it's work-related，maybe it's personal； it doesn't matter．Respond immediately and clear it from your mind-your focus is needed elsewhere．
64．A
Schedule a meeting that will move you forward．I'm talking about getting together with someone who has information that will be beneficial to you．This doesn't have to be formal； in fact，it doesn't even have to be related to your study at all．It can be dinner with a friend from whom you want some advice，for example．Just get that person on the phone，and then get that meeting on the calendar．
65．C
Do absolutely nothing for 15minutes straight．Yes，choosing to do nothing is，in fact，doing something．Spend 15minutes in silence，giving your mind and spirit and chance to refresh and regroup．I promise that when the 15minutes are up you will be able to return to whatever you're working on with a new perspective．

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