题目内容
【题目】假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom借给你的一本书你不慎丢失了。请你根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信:
表达歉意;2. 丢失过程; 3.补救措施。
注意: 1. 词数120左右
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I heartedly want to be a volunteer of yours. Here is something about me.
I am a student who will graduate from senior high school. I always regard my class as our family and sacrifice my personal interests whenever necessary. Besides taking an active part in class activities, I work responsibly to build up a good reputation for the team. I respect all the people around me and I’m always willing to give a hand to those in need. I’m strict with myself, making every effort to achieve an all-round development. In time of difficulty, I always keep strong-minded.
In addition, I have a good command of English both in speaking and writing. I was in an America host family for 20 days in a summer camp, which helps me to know how to get along well with foreigners.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是篇邮件应用文,内容提示较简洁,只是框架,但学生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,用一般现在时和将来时。人称用第一和第二人称。根据写作要求文章分三段来写。第一段首先对不能及时回复邮件表示歉意并表明原因,之后提出自己的打算。第二段重点描述自己的具体计划和想法。第三段总结全文。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章要点齐全,表达思路明确,知识点运用恰当到位,文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如in time, prefer to go travelling, cultural background, broaden one’s horizon, enrich one’s knowledge等。还运用了现在完成进行时since I have been preparing for the final exam recently;to do做目的状语not only to enjoy the delicious food, but to learn about people from a different cultural background;定语从句where I can appreciate the creations of nature and relax myself;which should not be missed to broaden my horizon as well as enriching my knowledge.等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:first, second, finally, all in all等。