题目内容
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
All hope was not lost. Soon after the quakes, the army sent 150,000 soldier to Tang Shan to help the rescue workers. Hundred of thousands of people were helped. The army organize teams to dig out those which were trapped and to bury a dead. To the north of the city, most of the 10,000 miners were rescued at the coal mines there. Workers built shelters for survivors whose homes have been destroyed. Fresh water were taken to the city by train, truck and plane. Slow, the city began to breathe again.
1.were-was
2.soldier加s
3.Hundred加s
4.organize加ed
5.which改为who
6.a dead.改为the
7.at--from
8.have--had
9.were--was
10.Slow--slowly
【解析】
1.】were-was 考查主谓一致。Hope 做主语时谓语动词用第三人称。
2.加s 考查名词的复数形式。根据150,000用复数形式。
3.加s 考查数词。Hundreds of 数以百计的。
4.加ed 考查动词的时态。整篇文章用一般过去时。
5.which改为who 考查定语从句。先行词是those people ，故定语从句用who来引导。
6. dead.改为the 考查冠词。The adj 表示一类人。
7.--from 考查介词。句意：许多的矿工从煤矿中被救出来。
8.--had 考查动词的时态。根据语境可知已经被破坏，过去的过去，用过去完成时。
9.】were—was 考查主谓一致。Water做主语时，谓语动词用单数形式。
10.—slowly 考查副词 句意：慢慢的，这个城市又开始了呼吸。
考点：短文改错。
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