Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years .It came sudden and went on for over three hours .After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest .The air was hot, but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room .Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window .As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall .When I come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harder .Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house .When I ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom .

 

Answer 1

1.a 改为the

2.sudden改成 suddenly

3.but改为and

4.out后加of

5.it改为them

6.drop改为drops

7.come改为came

8.more改为much或去掉

9.that改为what

10.broke改为broken

【解析】

试题分析：上星期天我遭遇来了多年来未遇到过的最严重的风暴。它来的很突然，经历了三个多小时。午餐后，我走进我的房间休息了。空气很热，周围很安静。然后一阵大风吹进了我的房间。桌上的纸飞出了打开的窗子。我就跑去抓，大滴的雨开始打下来。当回到家的时候，雨更大了。然后我听到一声巨响。我就跑出去，看到一颗大树歪倒了，砸坏了密室的房顶。

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考点：考查短文改错