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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。

修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years .It came sudden and went on for over three hours .After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest .The air was hot, but all was quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room .Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window .As I ran out to catch it, big drop of rain began to fall .When I come back into the house, it was raining more harder and harder .Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house .When I ran out to find out that had happened, a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom .

 

1.a 改为the

2.sudden改成 suddenly

3.but改为and

4.out后加of

5.it改为them

6.drop改为drops

7.come改为came

8.more改为much或去掉

9.that改为what

10.broke改为broken

【解析】

试题分析:上星期天我遭遇来了多年来未遇到过的最严重的风暴。它来的很突然,经历了三个多小时。午餐后,我走进我的房间休息了。空气很热,周围很安静。然后一阵大风吹进了我的房间。桌上的纸飞出了打开的窗子。我就跑去抓,大滴的雨开始打下来。当回到家的时候,雨更大了。然后我听到一声巨响。我就跑出去,看到一颗大树歪倒了,砸坏了密室的房顶。

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I couldn’t help staring at him. I wondered what kind of person he had been ten or twenty years before, and what he would be like if luck had gone his way. I had a hurt in my heart for this kind of human soul, all alone in the world. I told him that I was sorry, but store rules didn’t allow me to do so. I felt stupid and unkind saying this, but I valued my job.

Just then, another man, standing behind the first, spoke up. If anything, he looked more pitiable. “Change it to me, ” was all he said.

What I had been feeling was pity. Pity is soft and safe and easy. Compassion, on the other hand, is caring in action. I thanked the second man but told him that was not allowed either. Then I reached into my pocket and paid for the biscuits myself. I reached into my pocket because these two men had reached into my heart and taught me compassion.

1.The aged gentleman who wanted to buy the biscuits_________ .

A.hoped to have the food first and pay later

B.promised to obey the store rules

C.forgot to take any money with him

D.could not afford anything more expensive

2.Which of the following best describes the old gentleman?

A.kind and lucky B.friendly and helpful

C.poor and lonely D.hurt and disappointed

3.The writer acted upon the store rules because_________ .

A.he felt no pity for the old gentleman

B.he considered the old man dishonest

C.he expected someone else to pay for the old man

D.he wanted to keep his present job

4.What does the writer learn from his experience?

A.Wealth is more important than anything else

B.Experience is better gained through practice

C.Obeying the rules means more than compassion.

D.Helping others is easier said than done

 

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After the separation,the rover and lander will take photos of each other and start their own scientific explorations. Engineers made final checks of the environment of the landing site,the situation of the probe and sent signals of separation to Chang’e-3.

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Yutu will survey the moon’s geological structure and surface substances and look for natural resources for three months,while the lander will conduct in-situ (现场) exploration right at its landing site for one year.

1.What’s the passage mainly about?

A.China’s first moon rover,Yutu,touched the lunar surface.

B.The rover and the lander took photos of each other successfully.

C.Chang’e-3 landed on the moon’s Sinus Iridum, or the Bay of Rainbows.

D.Yutu will survey the moon’s geological structure to find substances.

2.Which of the following show the correct order of the Yutu’s landing?

a.drive to the transfer mechanism b.extend its solar panel c.follow a ladder mechanism

d.descend to the surface e.unlock the transfer mechanism

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3.We can learn from the last two paragraphs that .

A.Yutu’s two wings are l.5 meters long and l meter wide

B.Yutu will explore the moon right at its site for one year

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Although being famous might sound like a dream come true, today’s stars, feeling like zoo animals, face pressures that few of us can imagine. They are at the center of much of the world’s attention. Paparazzi(狗仔队) camp outside their homes, cameras ready. Tabloids(小报) publish thrilling stories about their personal lives. Just imagine not being able to do anything without being photographed or interrupted for a signature!

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B. can no longer have their privacy protected

C. spend too much on their public appearance

D. care little about how they have come into fame

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A. Great heroes of the past were generally admired.

B. The problem faced by celebrities has a long history.

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D. Works of popular writers often have a lot of readers.

3.What makes it much harder to be a celebrity today?

A. Availability of modern media.

B. Inadequate(无法适应的) social recognition.

C. Lack of favorable chances.

D. Huge population of fans.

4.What is the author’s attitude toward modern celebrity?

A. Sincere. B. Sceptical.

C. Disapproving . D. Sympathetic.

 

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