Question

6．近日，西安医学院用狗做实验后遗弃引发社会热议．假设你是李华，请给校报英文专栏"My Opinion"投稿，谈谈你的观点并呼吁保护动物．
注意：
1．词数100左右：
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：西安医学院Xi'an Medical University．
Dear editor
Recently，the Xi'an Medical University experimental dogshad been abandoned led social buzz．How cruel behavior it is!Animal is the friend of mankind，such cruel behavior should be eliminated（高分句型一）．
As far as I am concerned，something must be done to stop this illegal action．We believe"no buying，no killing"．First，we must make concerning laws to protect these animals in danger．Second，we must take some measures to protect animals effectively．Animals are our friends and part of our environment．Third，we should raise people's awareness to protect animals and our environment．In this way，we can build a harmonious society and ensure a sustainable development．What I am eager to do is to raise people's awareness of animal protection and appeal to more people to care for our earth companies（高分句型二）．
It is my belief that all human beings can make a difference together．I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Animal is the friend of mankind，such cruel behavior should be eliminated．
动物是人类的朋友，这样残忍的行为应该被杜绝．
高分句型二：
What I am eager to do is to raise people's awareness of animal protection and appeal to more people to care for our earth companies．
我想要做的是提高人们保护环境的意识，呼吁更多的人关心我们地球的伴侣．

解答 Dear editor
Recently，the Xi'an Medical University experimental dogs had been abandoned led social buzz．How cruel behavior it is!Animal is the friend of mankind，such cruel behavior should be eliminated（高分句型一）．
As far as I am concerned，something must be done to stop this illegal action．We believe"no buying，no killing"．First，we must make concerning laws to protect these animals in danger．Second，we must take some measures to protect animals effectively．Animals are our friends and part of our environment．Third，we should raise people's awareness to protect animals and our environment．In this way，we can build a harmonious society and ensure a sustainable development．What I am eager to do is to raise people's awareness of animal protection and appeal to more people to care for our earth companies（高分句型二）．
It is my belief that all human beings can make a difference together．I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval．
Yours
Li Hua

点评 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．