题目内容
【题目】假定你是某校学生会主席李华,学校下个月12号将举办运动会。请你给校国际部的留学生拟一个参赛通知,内容包括:
1. 运动会比赛项目介绍;
2. 报名方式和截止时间;
3. 注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Notice
Girls and boys, I’m very glad to inform you all that our school sports meeting is going to start soon on 12th of next month and I would like to invite you to join it. The event will include 20 different games like running, the high jump and the long jump and so on. You can choose them based on your interest. But remember that a participant can only participate in only 3 events. Besides, if you want to participate in it, you should give your name to your monitor before this Friday.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封参赛通知,通知国际部的留学生参加运动会。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第一、二人称;
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时;
要点:
1. 运动会比赛项目介绍;
2. 报名方式和截止时间;
3. 注意事项。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
Inform; invite sb. to do; include; (be) based on; participant; participate in; monitor等。
第三步:连词成句
1. Girls and boys, I’m very glad to inform you all that our school sports meeting is going to start soon on 12th of next month and I would like to invite you to join it.
2. The event will include 20 different games like running, the high jump and the long jump and so on.
3. You can choose them based on your interest.
4. But remember that a participant can only participate in only 3 events.
5.Besides, if you want to participate in it, you should give your name to your monitor before this Friday.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改