Question

6．假如你是某中学高三毕业生李华，你将作为毕业生代表在毕业晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲，谈谈你对高中生活的看法：
（1）对获得的帮助表示感谢；
（2）对学弟、学妹的建议；
（3）努力学习，实现人生梦想；
（4）对母校和老师的祝福．
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My teachers an fellow students，
In a couple of weeks，we'll say goodbye to our mother school．How time flies!As  senior three student，I have much to share with you．Firstly，I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．Without their help and advice，my life would be different．Secondly，I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．Above all，I've made up my mind to make every effort to study，for I believe hard work is the key to success．Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"
Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 这是在毕业晚会上作的一个简短的告别演讲．根据题目呀可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一表明演讲主题；二对获得的帮助表示感谢，对学弟、学妹的建议以及自己努力学习，实现人生梦想的决心；三对母校和老师的祝福．
高分句型：
1．Firstly，I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．句子里show my appreciation to 表示"对某人展示感激"；standing by me 是现在分词做定语，修饰 those，表示"支持"； included是过去分词做定语，修饰teachers，parents and friends．
首先，我要对一直帮助我的老师，父母和朋友表达我的感激．
2．Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．句子里on behalf of 表示"代表"；the graduates 表示"毕业生"；extend表示"给予"； respectable 表示"值得尊重的"．
最后，代表所有出席的毕业生，让我把我们真诚的祝愿给予我们的母校和这里值得尊重的老师们．

解答 My teachers and fellow students，
    In a couple of weeks，we'll say goodbye to our mother school．How time flies!As a senior three student，I have much to share with you．（表明演讲主题）
   Firstly，I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．【高分句型一】Without their help and advice，my life would be different．Secondly，I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．Above all，I've made up my mind to make every effort to study，for I believe hard work is the key to success．Just as the old saying goes，"no pains，no gains．"（对获得的帮助表示感谢，对学弟、学妹的建议以及自己努力学习，实现人生梦想的决心）
  Finally，on behalf of all the graduates present here，let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers．【高分句型二】Thank you!（对母校和老师的祝福）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类作文一般都只给出只言片语的提示，而不是完整的表达．此时我们就必须在大脑中将各信息点补充完整，适时使用一些短语和句型，以及各种从句． 此时要记住，"有话好好说，有话慢慢说"，不要想着一蹴而就．我们有这样的体验：提纲式书面表达的写作中，我们还没写几句，就感觉所有要点都已经表达完 了．在写作中要注意避免这样的情况，只能是多读多写．