假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词, 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I will share with you true story that happened a couple of day ago. One of my classmates bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few classmates were then inviting to enjoy the snacks. Unluckily, all of us got poisoned and had stomachaches with their faces pale. They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident makes us to realize the seriousness of the food safe problem. Therefore, I strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to it.

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3．If the word researcher brings to mind someone who works in a laboratory doing experiments or reads a11day in a library，then meet Dr．Sylvia Earle．Dr．Earle has carried out much of her research deep under the sea．Her outstanding work at sea has included leading around 70expeditions（探险）and spending over 6，500hours under the water．She also holds the world record for the deepest walk alone on the ocean floor at a depth of 381metres．It's no wonder she has been given the nickname"Her Deepness"．
As a child，Dr．Earle was always interested in wildlife and was never afraid to find out about nature．Her parents told her to touch animals and insects，and not to be afraid of them．When she was older，she was given the opportunity to develop this interest thanks to scho1arships to study botany at university．She also took courses in sea diving and decided to devote herself to marine（海洋的）biology．It was this decision and her determined character that led her to have a truly remarkable career．
After several years of diving，Dr．Earle took part in a research expedition in an underwater laboratory．The laboratory was called a Tektite Habitat and it allowed divers to remain under the water to carry out research for weeks at a time．In 1970an all-female group went on the sixth expedition of the Tektite II scientists-in-the-water programme．Dr．Earle was asked to lead the expedition．Along with another four women-three scientists and an engineer-she stayed in the Tektite Habitat for two weeks．
Marine life has always been at the centre of Dr．Earle's work and she is highly respected for her authority in this field．She is often asked to give talks by environmental groups about marine life as well as her plan to create a global network of marine protected areas．What makes her extra special is that she doesn't look upon her work as a job，but as her vocation（天职）in life．
21．In what way is Dr．Earle different from most researchers we know about？C
A．She works in a laboratory doing experiments all day．
B．She reads all day in a library．
C．She carries out much of her research deep under the sea．
D．She has broken lots of world records．
22．What's the main idea of Paragraph 2？D
A．Dr．Earle's interest in wildlife led her to a truly remarkable career．
B．Dr．Earle's success is chiefly due to her family background．
C．Dr．Earle's success is chiefly due to the scholarships to study botany at university．
D．Various factors have contributed to Dr．Earle's success．
23．Which of the following is true according to Paragraph 3？A
A．Five women took part in the expedition．
B．Five scientists took part in the expedition．
C．Dr．Earle was an ordinary member of the group．
D．The group stayed under water for three weeks．
24．What does Dr．Earle hope to achieve in the future？B
A．To keep marine life at the centre of her work．
B．To create protected areas in the oceans around the world．
C．To travel around the world giving talks．
D．To look upon her work as her vocation in life．

20．It's always hard to remember a name when one doesn't have a face to go with ______．（　　）

On April 14th, 2010, my entire life changed in an instant. One moment I was joyfully riding through the sunshine. The next moment, metal, flesh and bone were spreading against the pavement in a thunderous crash. Another cyclist, biking carelessly, had cut me off and sent me supermanning toward oncoming traffic.

As if to symbolize the accident that had hit my life, another disaster also occurred on April 14th, 2010. It cost the airline industry ＄l.7 billion. Ten million travelers were stuck for days. Economies all over the world were disturbed. This was the eruption of Eyjafjallajokull, one of Iceland’s many volcanoes.

However, volcanoes are not all bad. In fact, they are necessary. They are responsible for the birth of new earth, and for the creation of rich soil. This eruption gave off 0.15 million tons of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere daily. But cancelling 48% of the worlds flight travel saved about 2.8 million tons of CO2 from entering the atmosphere，temporarily decreasing our carbon footprint.

Similarly, the accident had badly affected my emotion but it also allowed me to look more closely inside myself and discover things about myself I never would have realized. I learned how not to judge myself for my new limitations.

In 1973, another Icelandic volcano, Eldfell, broke out. Icelanders decided to bomb it with cold water until it froze and chose a different path. After their plan worked，they used the geothermal (地热) energy for the next 15 years to heat their homes. A good example of life bringing lemons, and making lemonade! One must move on from misfortunes, focusing only on the present moment and being hopeful for the future.

I ran from April 14th, 2010, to every kind of escape. Eventually I ended up in university for a new-found love in Earth sciences.

1.What happened to the writer on April 14th, 2010?

A. He was involved in a car crash.

B. He was stuck in Iceland’s airport.

C. He witnessed a volcanic eruption.

D. He was badly injured on a bike ride.

2.Which was an effect of the eruption of Eyjafjallajokull?

A. Economy was cost globally by the eruption.

B. Carbon dioxide was increased temporarily.

C. The earth in Ireland was terribly polluted.

D. Most of the world’s planes were held up.

3.Why did the writer mention the Eldfell volcano?

A. It broke out in Iceland on April 14th as well.

B. It symbolized the accident that changed his life.

C. It encouraged him to know more about himself.

D. It told us to make the most of given situation.

4.What is the best title for the passage?

A. Inspiration from Disasters B. Escape from Volcanoes

C. Love for Earth Science D. Attitude towards Nature

How can you find out what is going on inside a person’s body without opening the patient s body up? Regular X-rays can show a lot. CAT scans can show even more. They can give a complete view of body organs.

What is a CAT scan? CAT stands for a kind of machine. It is a special X-ray machine that gets a 360-degree picture of a small area of a patient’s body.

Doctors use X-rays to study and determine diseases and injuries within the body. X-rays can find a foreign object inside the body or take pictures of some inside organs to be X-rayed.

A CAT scanner，however，uses a group of X-rays to give a cross-sectional (横截面) view of a specific part of the body. A fine group of X-rays is scanned across the body and around the patient from many different directions. A computer studies the information from each direction and produces a clear cross-sectional picture on a screen. This picture is then photo-graphed for later use. Several cross sections, taken one after another，can give clear “photos” of the entire body or of any body organs. The latest CAT scanners can even give clear pictures of active，moving organs，just as a fast-action camera can “stop the action”，giving clear pictures of what appears unclear to the eye. And because of the 360-degree pictures, CAT scans show clear and complete views of organs in a manner that was once only shown during operation or examination of a dead patient.

Frequent appearance before X-rays can cause skin burns, cancer or other damage to the body. Yet CAT scans actually don’t cause the patient to more radiation than regular X-rays do. CAT scans can also be done without getting something harmful into the patient, so they are less risky than regular X-rays.

CAT scans provide exact, detailed information. They can quickly find such a thing as bleeding inside the brain. They are helping to save lives.

1.The underlined words “a foreign object” in Paragraph 3 most probably refer to .

A. a badly injured part inside the body

B. a new thing that is unknown to the doctor

C. a strange cell that has grown in the body

D. a thing that gets inside the body by chance

2.What is the special use of the latest CAT scanners?

A. It can take pictures of inside organs.

B. It provides clear photos of moving organs.

C. It won’t cause serious skin bums, cancer or other damage to the body.

D. It helps to find out illness inside a person’s body without opening it up.

3.What can we infer from this text?

A. Patients in front of CAT may suffer a bit of radiation,

B. Doctors need no opening-up of the body with CAT scanners.

C. CAT scanners are more expensive than regular X-ray machines.

D. CAT scanners can take photos of either the whole body or a part of it.

4.What can be the best title of this text?

A. The newest medical invention

B. A special X-ray machine to save lives

C. How to avoid the damage from X-rays

D. Advantages and disadvantages of CAT scanners

According to a recent survey, the modem housewife spends an average of 60 hours a week on household work compared to 46 to 52 hours some 50 years ago; and a far greater part of her __ hours are spent in shopping.

In grandma’s __, the butcher, the baker and the grocer’s shop were just __. Today’s housewife goes to the __ at least twice a week-- __ the stores are so big, so crowded and so far away that each trip __ anything up to three hours.

I don’t think we have to go as far back as 50 years for confirmation of the great __ in shopping patterns. It is only 23 years __ I moved from one of the most beautiful High Streets in Buckinghamshire-a lovely wide street where almost every __ is listed as an architectural jewel. Wandering back last week I __ to think about the changes. Of some 15 shops, 12 have turned __ to antiques or something similar. So shops that had been in the High Street for generations are __ forever -- and a way of life has gone with them.

I love the __ of those old shops, the gossip and the chatter while __ to be served, the arrival of new neighbors and the births and deaths all swiftly __. We were part of a neighborhood--made so by our __ meetings--and we stayed friends.

Soon after my daughter was married she returned to live in this same High Street. “Why, Fiona,” __ the postwoman when she walked into the tiny P.O. store which __ survives, “how lovely to see you! You haven’t changed a bit.” Fiona was a __ girl when we left and the postwoman hadn’t seen her for 13 years or more.

See what I __? It could never happen in a supermarket!

1.A. busy B. spare C. happy D. extra

2.A. name B. home C. day D. way

3.A. outside the town B. in the distance C. on the way D. around the corner

4.A. countryside B. supermarket C. park D. restaurant

5.A. so B. but C. though D. because

6.A. takes B. provides C. saves D. contains

7.A. time B. fun C. idea D. change

8.A. that B. until C. since D. when

9.A. building B. garden C. neighbor D. customer

10.A. forgot B. hated C. paused D. managed

11.A. back B. over C. up D. on

12.A. lost B. ruined C. missed D. kept

13.A. business B. friendliness C. tidiness D. fairness

14.A. helping B. preparing C. waiting D. offering

15.A. reminded B. recorded C. reviewed D. reported

16.A. daily B. rare C. official D. private

17.A. asked B. said C. whispered D. announced

18.A. hardly B. also C. even D. still

19.A. little B. nice C. shy D. lovely

20.A. doubt B. guess C. mean D. remember

More than three decades ago, I was a student at a high school in Southern California. The student body of 3,200 was a melting pot of ethnic groups. The environment was _________.

One day I was walking down the side walk when someone kicked me from behind. Turning ________, I discovered the local gang. Fists came from every _______as the 15 gang members surrounded me. ________I had to have an operation. My doctor told me that if I had been hit in the head _______, I probably would have died.

After I _______, some friends said, “Let’s get these guys!” That was the way _______were “resolved”. A part of me said, “Yes!” But another part of me ________and said no. History has proved time and again that revenge only _______the conflict. We needed to do something different to break the counter-productive(适得其反的) chain of _______.

Working with various ethnic groups, we ______what we called a “Brotherhood Committee” to work on improving ________relationships. I was amazed to learn how much _______fellow students had in building a brighter future.

Two years later, I _______Student Body President. Even though I ran against two friends, one a football hero and the other a popular “big man of the campus”, a significant majority of the 3,200 students joined me in the ______of doing things differently. We made significant progress in building bridges between _______, learning how to talk with and _______different ethnic groups, resolving differences without _______and learning how to build trust in the most difficult of circumstances.

Being stacked by the gang was clearly one of my toughest life moments. What I learned, ______, about

responding with love rather than returning hate has been a ______force in my life. Turning up our light in the presence of those whose light is dim(昏暗的)becomes the difference that makes the difference.

1.A. clear B. tough C. protective D. dirty

2.A. around B. on C. into D. out

3.A. means B. situation C. approach D. direction

4.A. Gradually B. Regularly C. Eventually D. Frequently

5.A. over time B. one more time C. ahead of time D. in no time

6.A. treated B. recovered C. suffered D. calmed

7.A. conditions B. atmospheres C. fantasies D. problems

8.A. paused B. agreed C. started D. proceeded

9.A. remains B. finishes C. continues D. proves

10.A. accidents B. items C. events D. scenes

11.A. put together B. put aside C. put back D. put down

12.A. political B. racial C. civil D. national