Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线(________)，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。

　　Wang Peng enjoys being clever and wishes to do a great job．However, he is firmly fasten to his original position by the nature of laziness and certainly achieves everything．

　　In fact, you can see many such example in life．Just as the old saying goes, diligence leads to success while laziness results from failure．Every task require hard work, from learning English to build a house．Some of my classmates are definitely clever, and they had a strong desire to go to a famous university, but unfortunate, they are wasting the time talking or playing．And as a result, they end in failure．

　　Therefore, in my opinion, diligence plays a very important role in life．Only by working hard and practising a lot are we able overcome difficulties and achieve our goals．No one can succeed just by thinking without any actions．

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Wang Peng enjoys being clever and wishes to do a great job．However, he is firmly fasten(fastened)to his original position by the nature of laziness and certainly achieves everyt hing．(nothing) 　　In fact, you can see many such example(examples)in life．Just as the old saying goes, diligence leads to success while laziness results from(in)failure．Every task require(requires)hard work, from learning English to build(building)a house．Some of my classmates are definitely clever, and they had(have)a strong desire to go to a famous university, but unfortunate (unfortunately), they are wasting the(/)time talking or playing．And as a result, they end in failure． 　　Therefore, in my opinion, diligence plays a very important role in life．Only by working hard and practising a lot are we able∧(to)overcome difficulties and achieve our goals．No one can succeed just by thinking without any actions．