Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 

This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop. 30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

Answer 1

1.去掉a

2.minute----minutes

3.and --but

4.with ---on

5.when --- than

6.waited前面加had

7.other-- another

8.do --did

9.possible --- possibly

10.lose---losing

【解析】

1.小题1】be动词+of后面用抽象名词，抽象名词是不可数名词，前面不能用冠词，去掉a。

2.小题2】30分钟是复数形式， minute----minutes。

3.小题3】等公交车等了30分钟但是没有公交车来，前后句是转折关系and –but。

4.小题4】“步行” on foot.是固定短语。介词with ---on。

5.小题5】no sooner. . . than “一. . .就”是 固定短语。 when --- than

6.小题6】if虚拟语气与过去事实虚拟，if从句用过去完成时，waited前面加had。

7.小题7】又等了30分钟，表示“又一” another+数字 ，other-- another。

8.小题8】通篇是一般过去时，现在时 do –did。

9.小题9】副词修饰动词，形容词possible --- possibly。

10.小题10】介词后用doing形式，close to +doing形式， lose---losing。

考点：短文改错