题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,诺丁汉大学(The University of Nottingham)2017年计划在中国招收一批优秀高中毕业生,你准备报名。请你向该校招生负责人Dr. Dan发一封电子邮件,包括以下内容:
1. 简要说明你的意向及个人情况;
2. 适当咨询申请入学的准备工作(如:笔试、面试的时间以及考查重点、学费等);
3. 具体询问学校的课程安排以及学生的在校学习、课外活动、业余生活、住宿等情况。
注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
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【答案】Dear Dr. Dan,
I'm writing to ask for some information about your school and how to be admitted to your university.
As a Senior 3 student, I have always been considering going abroad for turther studies, which I suppose will benefit me greatly in the long term. I'm an outstanding student and good at physics and biology, including English of course and I hope to grasp this opportunity to realize my dream.
What puzzles me is that I don't know the exact time for the test and interview, and also I am confused about what to be prepared for the test. Besides this, I will greatly appreciate it if you could introduce me something about the school life in your university, especially the extra-curriculum activities and tuition.
Thank you so much and I'm looking forward to you reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;诺丁汉大学(The University of Nottingham)2017年计划在中国招收一批优秀高中毕业生,你准备报名;你向该校招生负责人Dr. Dan发一封电子邮件,包括以下内容:简要说明你的意向及个人情况;适当咨询申请入学的准备工作(如:笔试、面试的时间以及考查重点、学费等);具体询问学校的课程安排以及学生的在校学习、课外活动、业余生活、住宿等情况。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:ask for some information(询问信息),a Senior 3 student(一名高三学生),further study(深造),the test and interview (笔试和面试),the extra-curriculum activities and tuition(课外活动和学费)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如现在完成进行时和定语从句As a Senior 3 student, I have always been considering going abroad for turther studies, which I suppose will benefit me greatly in the long term.;主语从句及表语从句What puzzles me is that I don't know the exact time for the test and interview,全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
【题目】写作。
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,你校正在招募志愿者,为春节期间中外学生交流活动做准备。请根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一封e-mail,向学校外事办公室提出申请。注意:1. E-mail的开头和结尾已为你写好。2. 词数不少于100。
Name | Li Hua |
Class | Class 1, Senior 3 |
Qualifications | speak English fluently have similar experiences be willing to spread Chinese culture …… |
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for a position as a volunteer.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua