题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是李华,于2016年2月1日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后, 发现遗失了一个行李箱(suit case)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找。
信件要点包括:
1. 陈述写信原因;
2. 简要描述该行李;
3. 说明其重要性;
4. 期待回复并表示感谢。
信件的开头已经写好,字数100词左右。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on Feb. 1, 2016. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suitcase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.
My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it. It is really important for me, because I had put some important things in it, including my laptop and one of my favorite books. Besides, it is what my father sent to me on my birthday.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:
本文要求写一封信给航空公司,请求航空公司帮忙寻找丢失的行李箱,在信中描述行李箱的细节,最后对航空公司表示感谢。写作时注意以下几点:1.涵盖所有内容。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时和一般过去式,以第一人称为主。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】
文章使用了非常好的短语和句子给文章增色,如with my name and address on it(with的独立结构);including my laptop and one of my favorite books(现在分词伴随状语);it is what my father sent to me on my birthday.(what引导的表语从句);还有Besides等有效地使语句间连接紧凑。
