Question

短文改错 Dear Tracy, 　 Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats 1．________ me as a careless children．He doesn’t value my opinions． 2．________ He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 3．________ leaving things lying around in the house while he did this 4．________ all time．I think he fails to set an example to me to 5．________ follow．But he often says, “Doing as I say, not as I do．” 6．________ Even worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests, 7．________ making me feel hurting．I love my father, but I can’t 8．________ bear what he does．I have been tried many times 9．________ to talk with he but he never listens．Please, help me． 10．________ Puzzled

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解析：

　　1．去掉but　although和but不能用在同一个句子中。

　　2．children→child　父亲把“我”看作是粗心的孩子，应该是单数。

　　3．about→for　根据句意判断，leaving things lying around in the house应该是punishes me的原因。

　　4．did→does　全文的主体时态为现在时，讲述一般情况。

　　5．all后加the　all the time为固定短语，意为“一直；老是”。

　　6．Doing→Do　父亲说的话应该是对我的要求，所以用祈使句。

　　7．√

　　8．hurting→hurt　hurt的过去式和过去分词与原形同形。

　　9．去掉been　try意为“尝试”时，为不及物动词，不能用于被动语态。

　　10．第一个he→him　介词with后应用宾格形式。