Question

Ladies and Gentlemen：

Welcomed to the West Lake. First of all, let me make a brief introduction for it .

    The West Lake like a shining pearl lying in the west of Hangzhou City. Surrounded by hill on the three sides, it is famous for it beautiful scenery, a plenty of historic sites and a variety of local products. Legend has it that the West Lake was a jewel falling from heaven when geologists insist this place had been a shallow sea gulf before it became that it is today. In any case, the West Lake inspired poets and painters for centuries. Enjoy your trip. Thank you !

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 welcome d--welcome

 for- to

 ∧is like

 hill-hills

 it-its

 a plenty of a 去掉

 falling –fallen

 when – while

 that –what

 has inspired

【解析】

试题分析：西湖位于杭州市的西部，三面环山，周围有很多历史遗迹。它就像一颗珍珠，吸引着很多的游客来到这里参观。传说中的西湖是一颗散落在人间的珍珠，而地质学家认为在西湖形成今天这个样子之前，它曾是一个浅浅的海湾。

 考查固定句型。Welcomed to the West Lake. Welcome在此是感叹词，welcome to some place“欢迎某人到某地”，所以把welcomed改为welcome。

 考查介词用法。let me make a brief introduction for it ，make an introduction to sb、sth“对。。做介绍”，所以把for改为to。

 考查谓语动词。The West Lake like a shining pearl 。like做动词意思是“喜欢”，当介词时意思是“像”。此句意思是西湖像一颗闪光的珍珠，所以在like前加is。

 考查名词复数。Surrounded by hill on the three sides,hill是可数名词， 西湖三面环山，所以应该用复数，把hill改为hills。

 考查代词用法。it is famous for it beautiful scenery根据句意可知西湖是以它的风景而闻名，所以把 it改为its，表示所属关系。

 考查冠词用法。a plenty of historic sites固定短语plenty of “大量，许多” ，所以a plenty of前面去掉a。

 考查非谓语动词。the West Lake was a jewel falling from heaven 从语法可知现在分词做定语表示主动或者进行，而此时a jewel和后面的fall 是表示动作的完成，所以把falling 改为fallen。

 考查连词。when geologists insist this place had been a shallow sea gulf 根据上下文可知此处表示前后内容的对比，传说中西湖是天堂掉下来的珍珠，而地理学家坚持认为西湖是一个浅的海湾，所以把when 改为 while。

 考查名词性从句的连接词。before it became that it is today 从结构可知became后是宾语从句，从句意思不完整，所以把that 改为what。

 考查动词时态。The West Lake inspired poets and painters for centuries从语境可知此句应该用现在完成时，表示持续到现在的状况，所以在inspired前加has。

考点：考查短文改错。