题目内容
请以How to Keep Psychologically Healthy? 为题,根据以下提示,写一篇120词左右的短文。1、心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因
2、分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因(可从压力过大、缺乏人际交往能力等方面加以分析)
3、你认为人们应如何保持心理健康
参考词汇: 心理咨询师psychological consultant
How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?
Many people will experience some kind of mental health problem in their daily life. When you fail to manage these problems, they are likely to cause various illnesses.
The causes of mental health problems often vary a lot. In today's society, a good number of people are suffering from heavy pressure. Others lack communication skills. In addition, a lot of people don't know how to keep mentally fit.
There are a lot of ways to solve mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy. First, find the real cause of your mental health problem and see whether you can do something to make a change. Second, learn to relax yourself and take exercise to release the pressure. Last but not least, you may find it helpful to talk to your partners or friends about your problem, or seek support and advice from a psychological consultant if necessary.
【解析】这是一篇议论文写作。先选定自己的观点,就自己的观点给出几个原因,最后得出解决问题的办法,题目已经给定大致内容,写作时要注意适当增加内容,以保证文章的连贯性。文章第一段第二句When you fail to manage these problems, they are likely to cause various illnesses. 是由When引导的时间状语从句,fail to do和be likely to do的运用,句意明了,表达到位。第二段是叙述的是导致问题发生的原因,用了一个动词”vary”,意为原因多变,随后用了“a good number of、others、in addition”引出了三个原因;动词“suffer from遭受”和”lack缺乏”在运用上,能够用简短的单词表达自己的意思。第三段提出了解决办法。作者用了三个副词“first、second、last but not least”清晰的列出三条解决办法,使阅卷老师一目了然。动词短语make a change做出改变、release the pressure降压、seek support寻求帮助的运用也能让文章增色不少。总结:写作时对于一些常用的动词,要注意其其他形式以更为简练的表达自己的观点。
考点:考查议论文写作