题目内容
请根据以下内容写一封回信。(30分) 字数:100-120个单词
Dear Miss Wang , I am a student from Huzhou Senior High School . I have a problem . I’m not good at English . But I do want to change the situation . I hope that you can give me some advice on how to improve my English .
Yours
Xiao dong
Dear Xiao dong,
I'm very sorry that you have difficulty in learning English. However , the situation is easy to change if you take my advice . Here are some tips for you to follow.
Firstly, it is very useful for you to go over the words and expressions regularly. If you do this, you can use them freely whenever you want to .Secondly, I find it essential for you to listen to your teacher carefully and ask him if you have any trouble. By doing this, you will make much progress, and at the same time your teacher can give your more help. Thirdly, you'd better practise English with your classmates as often as possible. It's a good way to improve your speaking skills. Finally, I suggest that you should watch more English movies and listen to more English songs. That way , you will become more interested in it .
As long as you take my advice, I am sure you will have a good command of English soon
Yours
Xiao dong
【解析】
试题分析:考察写信函的格式,给出建议的语气,逻辑思维是否清晰。首先表达对别人问题的看法,最终的部分是建议,最后部分建议信函的万能格式;只要你采取我的建议,一定会有所提高,英语一定可以提高。第二段是这篇作文的关键,条理清晰的给出几点建议是主要考点,通过这一段的叙述可以看出考生的语言运用能力。特别要注意信函给当事人出意见应该用第二人称。
亮点说明:本文条例清晰,首先第一段对别人的问题感到抱歉,抱歉之后安慰别人,这些都可以改变的,如果你能听从我的建议。第二段给出自己的四个建议,第三段是对建议的总结也是对别人的祝愿。这样的三段式是很典型的提意见的风格,我们重点赏析第二段,这里用了Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly是作者给点建议更有条理。it is very useful for you to,I find it essential for you to,By,It's a good way to,you'd better. I suggest that sb (should) do sth这些亮点句式给文章添彩,而且会是语气更为委婉。 have a difficulty in doing sth , as often as possible,by doing this,As long as,亮点词组,让阅卷人瞬间起加分效果。
考点:考察信函类书写