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请根据以下内容写一封回信。(30分) 字数:100-120个单词

Dear Miss Wang , I am a student from Huzhou Senior High School . I have a problem . I’m not good at English . But I do want to change the situation . I hope that you can give me some advice on how to improve my English .

Yours

Xiao dong

Dear Xiao dong,

I'm very sorry that you have difficulty in learning English. However , the situation is easy to change if you take my advice . Here are some tips for you to follow.

Firstly, it is very useful for you to go over the words and expressions regularly. If you do this, you can use them freely whenever you want to .Secondly, I find it essential for you to listen to your teacher carefully and ask him if you have any trouble. By doing this, you will make much progress, and at the same time your teacher can give your more help. Thirdly, you'd better practise English with your classmates as often as possible. It's a good way to improve your speaking skills. Finally, I suggest that you should watch more English movies and listen to more English songs. That way , you will become more interested in it .

As long as you take my advice, I am sure you will have a good command of English soon

Yours

Xiao dong

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试题分析:考察写信函的格式,给出建议的语气,逻辑思维是否清晰。首先表达对别人问题的看法,最终的部分是建议,最后部分建议信函的万能格式;只要你采取我的建议,一定会有所提高,英语一定可以提高。第二段是这篇作文的关键,条理清晰的给出几点建议是主要考点,通过这一段的叙述可以看出考生的语言运用能力。特别要注意信函给当事人出意见应该用第二人称。

亮点说明:本文条例清晰,首先第一段对别人的问题感到抱歉,抱歉之后安慰别人,这些都可以改变的,如果你能听从我的建议。第二段给出自己的四个建议,第三段是对建议的总结也是对别人的祝愿。这样的三段式是很典型的提意见的风格,我们重点赏析第二段,这里用了Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly是作者给点建议更有条理。it is very useful for you to,I find it essential for you to,By,It's a good way to,you'd better. I suggest that sb (should) do sth这些亮点句式给文章添彩,而且会是语气更为委婉。 have a difficulty in doing sth , as often as possible,by doing this,As long as,亮点词组,让阅卷人瞬间起加分效果。

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A 13-year-old Russian, Daniil Korotkikh, was walking with his parents on a beach when he saw something lying in the sand.

“I saw that bottle and it looked interesting,” Korotkikh told The Associated Press on Tuesday. “it looked like a German beer bottle and there was a message inside. ”

It said, “My name is Frank, and I’m five years old. My dad and I are traveling on a ship to Denmark. If you find this letter, please write back to me, and I will write back to you.” The letter, dated 1987, included an address in the town of Coesfeld.

The boy in the letter, Frank Uesbeck, is now 29. His parents still live at the letter’s address.

The Russian boy and the German man met each other earlier this month through an internet video link. The Russian boy said he did not believe that the bottle actually spent 24 years in the sea. He believed it had been hidden under the sand where he found it for a long time.

Uesbeck was especially happy that he was able to have a positive effect on a life of a young person far away from Germany. “It‘s really a wonderful story,” he said. “And who knows? Perhaps one day we will actually be able to arrange a meeting in person. ”

1.What is this passage mainly about?

A. Message in a bottle.

B. A beautiful beer bottle.

C. Traveling on a ship.

D. Meeting an old friend.

2.When the German boy threw the bottle into the sea, ________________.

A. he was going back home.

B. he was already 29 years old.

C. he was walking with his parents on a beach.

D. he was traveling to Denmark by ship with his dad.

3.According to the text, which of the following statements is TRUE?

A. Korotkikh’s parents still live in the town of Coesfeld.

B. The German boy did not believe that the bottle actually spent 24 years in the sea.

C. Frank Uesbeck and Daniil Korotkikh have met each other in person.

D. Daniil Korotkikh and Frank Uesbeck have got in touch with each other.

4.Why was Uesbeck very happy when he got the information of the 24 years’ beer bottle?

A. Because he could have a new friend.

B. Because the two boys could surf the internet together.

C. Because he finally got what he had lost.

D. Because he could have a positive influence on a life of a young person.

It is natural that young people are often uncomfortable when they are with their parents . They say their parents don’t understand them .They often think that their parents are out of touch with modern ways , that they are too serious(严肃) — too strict with their children and that they seldom give their children a free hand . It is true that parents often find it difficult to win their children’s trust(信任) and they often forget how they themselves felt when they were young .

For example , young people like to act on the spot without much thinking . It is one of their ways to show they have grown up and that they can face any difficult situation . However , older people worry more easily . Most of old people plan things ahead , at least in the back of their minds , and do not like their plans to be upset by something unexpected .

When you want your parents to let you do something , you will have better success if you ask before you really start doing it .

Young people often make their parents angry with their choices in clothes and in music . But they do not want to cause any trouble ; it is just that they feel cut off from the older people’s world , into which they have not yet been accepted . That’s why young people want to make a new culture of their own . And if their parents do not like their music or hairstyle or clothes or their ways of speech , this will make the young people very happy .

Sometimes you are so proud of yourself that you do not want your parents to say “yes” to what you do . All you want is to be left alone and do what you like . It is natural enough , after being a child for so many years , when you were completely under your parents’ control .

If you plan to control your life , you’d better win your parents over and try to get them to understand

you. If your parents see that you have a high sense of responsibility , they will certainly give you the right to do what you want to do .

1.Whom is this text written for ?

A. Parents

B. Both parents and their children

C. Young people

D. Teachers

2.The underlined expression “on the spot ” means ______ .

A. at the place where something happened.

B. by oneself

C. immediately

D. angrily

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A. ask for advice before they really start to do anything

B. do things without thinking carefully ahead

C. are very strict with themselves

D. think in the same way as their parents do

4. Why do young people like to have clothes and music in their own way ?

A. Because they want to make their parents angry .

B. Because they try to get their parents into trouble .

C. Because they want to try something new and look different from the older people .

D. Because they know they are cleverer than the older people .

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