Question

每位同学都希望自己具有良好的人际关系，成为班级中受欢迎的人。请你根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Popular Student”的英语短文，参加学校网站英语论坛的讨论。

受人喜爱的 个性品质	对待集体	热心班级活动，具有团队精神，工作负责
	对待他人	尊重、关心他人，富有同情心，……
	对待自己	（请考生自己拟定内容，列举至少两点）……

注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；  3．词数：120左右。
Being a popular student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers_________________
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Answer 1

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．To enjoy popularity, we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take an active part in all our class activities．We should be responsible for the work and keep teamwork spirit in mind.
To be a popular student, we must show our respect, concern and sympathy for others．As a result, we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need.
To be a popular student, we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development, being good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, social services and so on．In time of success we remain modest, while in time of difficulity we keep strong-minded.
All in all, being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.

解析试题分析：本文属于议论文体，提出一个主题，对这个主题展开讨论。对于这类文体宜采用三段式文章，第一段首先对从对待集体方面的态度和做法进行说明；第二段从对待他人的态度方面着手，结合文章的提示，进行说明；第三段通过对待自己的态度来对如何受欢迎陈述自己是如何做的，中间需要运用上表起承转合的连词、定语从句、倒装等语法现象使文章富有深度、句式多变。
考点：议论文
点评：书面表达是最能体现一个学生的语言运用能力和英语思维理解的题目，议论文的写作是比较容易的文体，提高作文无外乎平时多练习，在练习过程中，对于写错或是不知道表达的一定要多问老师，同时还应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。