题目内容
2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
Everyone has some unforgettable，impressive and meaningful birthday．As for me，my 18th birthday，that is in this year，impresses me most．
It was at my home where we celebrated it in the evening．We enjoy the party and had so much delicious food．To my great joy，my friends came to my home，all wearing a sweetly smile on their faces．The most exciting moment was that my mother put the birthday cake on the table and all my friends began to sing Happy Birthday．After making wish，I blew out all the candles．Losing in great excitement，they even forgot the time so that they didn't leave my house until midnight．
I am eighteen years old now，and I'll do my best to return back my parents'love and live up to their expectations．
分析 本文描述了自己的18岁生日．
我们在成长的过程中，一定有过印象深刻、难以忘怀或者富有意义的生日．作者在文章里简要描述庆祝生日的时间、地点、方式和参加对象；描述最让他感动的吹蜡烛的场景；以及对家人和朋友的感激之情．
解答 Everyone has some unforgettable，impressive and meaningful birthday．As for me，my 18th birthday，that is in this year，impresses me most．
It was at my home where we celebrated it in the evening．We enjoy the party and had so much delicious food．To my great joy，my friends came to my home，all wearing a sweetly smile on their faces．The most exciting moment was that my mother put the birthday cake on the table and all my friends began to sing Happy Birthday．After making∧wish，I blew out all the candles．Losing in great excitement，they even forgot the time so that they didn't leave my house until midnight．
I am eighteen years old now，and I'll do my best to return back my parents'love and live up to their expectations．
解析：
1．birthday-birthdays．考查名词复数．和some 一致，可知用可数名词birthday的复数名词birthdays．
2．that-which．考查非限制性定语从句．代指my 18th birthday，做非限制性定语从句的主语用which．
3．where-that．考查强调句式．和It was 一起构成强调句式，强调地点at my home 应该用that．
4．enjoy-enjoyed．考查谓语动词的时态．通过上句可知他在回忆过去，所以用一般过去时态，因此谓语动词用 enjoyed．
5．sweetly-sweet．考查形容词和副词的辨析．修饰名词 smile 用形容词sweet．
6．that-when．考查表语从句．表语从句my mother put the birthday cake on the table and all my friends began to sing Happy Birthday表示"在那一刻，妈妈把蛋糕放在桌上，所以的朋友开始唱生日歌"，所以从句缺少时间状语，应该用when引导表语从句．
7．wish 前面加a．考查冠词．wish 在这里是名词愿望，表示"许下一个愿望"，所以wish 前面加a．
8．losing-lost．考查非谓语动词．表示"沉浸在…里"用be lost in，所以lose和主语we 之间是被动关系，
所以用lost．
9．they even forgot中的they 改为we．考查人称代词．本句表示"我们忘记了时间"，所以用we．
10．back去掉．考查介词．return=go back．所以back去掉．
点评 考查短文改错．
形容词、副词也是短文改错的常考知识点，常常在需要形容词的地方用了副词或相反；关系副词where，when，why等的缺失或错用．根据形容词、副词的基本用法或句意确定错误．
