Question

书面表达（满分30分）

近期, 你所在城市的中学生就“最美汉字”进行投票。请阅读下面一则新闻报道, 用英文写一篇短文, 向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。

High school students recommend ren as message to the world

The Chinese character ren, a word that generally means “benevolence”, has been selected by high school students in a poll(民意调查)to highlight Chinese culture around the world. The character ren was selected by 8.33 percent of the 3, 000 respondents who took part in the poll, according to one of the organizers, a student from a high school.

It was followed by the characters ai, yi, meng and xiao, which mean ‘‘love”, “one”, “dream’’ and “filial piety”. Those characters ranked in the “top-20 most beautiful Chinese characters”.

China Daily, March 6, 2013. Page 4

你的短文应包括以下内容：

1. 简要概括学生推荐这五个汉字的理由。

2. 简述你最想推荐的一至两个汉字及其寓意。

3. 谈谈你的感想。

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述, 适当发挥, 不要简单翻译。

2. 词数120左右。开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。

Recently, some high school students have conducted a poll asking people to choose some Chinese characters that can best reflect Chinese culture. _________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, some high school students have conducted a poll asking people to choose some Chinese characters that can best reflect Chinese culture.

Among tens of thousands of characters, “ren, ai, yi, meng, xiao” are strongly recommended Obviously, most students think the five characters carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics, which are principles and necessities for a qualified human being.

Of all characters. 1 will also put ren on the top of my list、which is followed by meng. Being ren, that is, being kind, caring and helpful, calls on one to he friendly and considerate to others Holding meng, which means best wishes for the future, one is not only to seek for opportunities for a better life, but also to create brand-new things for people around the world, feeling happy and optimistic.  

Personally, Chinese characters are so charming that they are treasures of human cultures With deep love for Chinese culture, we should strive to promote them to tile world.

【解析】

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文讨论的话题是“最美汉字”从三个方面展开叙述。1. 简要概括学生推荐这五个汉字的理由。2. 简述你最想推荐的一至两个汉字及其寓意。3. 谈谈你的感想。要求考生先仔细阅读英语短文，在理解内容的基础上充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

考点：考查半开放性作文写作

点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。