Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Lucy,

I’m glad to hear that you are interesting in my city. As you read online, great changes have been taken place in our country. It is more convenient to live in the city than before. Private cars were everywhere now. Lots of people shop on Internet, that is especially popular among young people. What’s more, people are paying more attention on their health. You can find more people in the park or in their neighborhood, doing exercises. Even young people are paying lots of attention to their diet. All in all, our city looks very differently. I hope that they will be able to visit my city this summer holiday. I’m looking forward to show you around our city. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】interesting→interested

【2】been去掉

【3】were→are

【4】Internet前加the

【5】that→which

【6】on→to

【7】exercises→exercise

【8】differently→different

【9】they→you

【10】show→showing

【解析】

试题分析：李华在信中给朋友介绍了自己城市的变化，欢迎朋友来参观。

【1】interesting→interested.考查形容词。interesting“有趣的”，修饰物；interested“感兴趣的”，修饰人。be interested in“对…感兴趣”，故interesting改成interested。

【2】去掉been.考查被动形式。take place“发生”，是不及物动词，没有被动形式，故去掉been。

【3】were→are.考查时态。全文是一般现在时，且句中有now，故本句要用现在时，故were改成are。

【4】Internet前加the.考查冠词。表示“在网上”用on the Internet，故Internet前加the。

【5】that→which.考查非限制性定语从句。有逗号和前面分开表明是非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，因为是指代前面整句话的内容，故要用which引导。that改成which。

【6】on→to.考查固定短语。pay attention to“注意……”，是固定短语。故on改成to。

【7】exercises→exercise.考查名词。exercise做“练习”时是可数名词；做“锻炼”时是不可数名词没有复数，故exercises改成exercise。

【8】differently→different.考查形容词。句中look是系动词，指“看起来”，后加形容词作表语。故differently改成different。

【9】they→you.考查代词。我希望你能够今年暑假参观我们城市，此处是给朋友的信，故they改成you。

【10】show→showing.考查动词形式。句中looking forward to中的to是介词，后面加动词-ing形式，故show改成showing。