Question

在2008年北京奥运会上，中国著名运动员刘翔因脚伤退出比赛，引起人们的广泛争议。下面是腾讯网站的一项调查：

运动员受伤后，应该坚持还是应该退出？

选项名称	投票数	百分比		趋势
应该退出，健康比金牌重要	222292	34，77％	──────
运动场就是战场，刘翔应当坚持	123752	19．36％	───

请你结合上表，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。

注意：    1．词数100左右；  2．开头已给出，不计人总词数。

In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to his foot injury, which led to a heated discussion among people across the country.

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Answer 1

In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games Chinese athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to his foot injury, which led to a heated discussion among people across the country.

According to a survey conducted by Tencent Website, about 34 percent of the people think an athlete should quit the race when injured since health is much more important than a gold medal. While nearly 20 percent of the citizens believe that an injured athlete should hold on to the end instead of giving up halfway. They regard the sport field as a battlefield in which every athlete should fight for the honor of his or her country in spite of any difficulty.

In my opinion, it's a right choice for Liu Xiang to choose to quit the race. For one thing, nothing is more important than health and sports doesn't mean sacrificing one's health for a gold medal; for another, after Liu Xiang recovers fully, he still has many chances to realize his dream.

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