Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你市一家剧院将在本周末举办一场京剧演出，外教Jackson对此很感兴趣并向你打听相关事宜。请你用英语给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.简要介绍中国京剧；

2.演出内容：京剧名段；

3.邀请他一同前往观看。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】There will be a Beijing opera performance held in a theater this weekend. Now, let me introduce some details to you. As a perfect example of Chinese culture, Beijing opera has a long history. Centered in Beijing, the opera has many types of facial makeup, which refer to different characters.

As the poster says, some popular selections will be performed during the show time this weekend and some famous actors will show a visual feast for audience. So I sincerely invite you to go to watch the show with me. It can give you some interesting things to appreciate even though you can't understand what the actors sing. It will be a nice experience for you at least.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，你市一家剧院将在本周末举办一场京剧演出，外教Jackson对此很感兴趣并向你打听相关事宜。请你用英语给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.简要介绍中国京剧；2.演出内容：京剧名段；3.邀请他一同前往观看。其次选用正确的人称和时态，一般现在时和一般将来时是主体时态、用第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句Centered in Beijing, the opera has many types of facial makeup, which refer to different characters. 和让步状语从句It can give you some interesting things to appreciate even though you can’t understand what the actors sing.