Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Dear Sir,

How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.

Best wishes.

　　                                                         Yours sincerely, 　                                                   　        Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

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a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate

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often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that

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disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I

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same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do

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me the favor.

Best wishes.

　　                                                        Yours sincerely, 　                                                   　        Li Ming

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