题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你们班举行了一次讨论班会,有人认为课本知识更重要,有人认为实践经验更重要。请你分析这二种观点并阐述自己的观点,为校报班级论坛投稿。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A discussion is held in our class over the topic which is more important: knowledge from textbooks or experience from practice.
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【答案】
One possible version :
A discussion is held in our class over the topic which is more important: knowledge from textbooks or experience from practice.
Some students think knowledge from textbooks is more convincing for the reason that it comes from the practice of our ancestors and it can save us a lot of energy and time.
Other students believe experience from practice is more reliable for it comes directly from our own activities and the knowledge on textbooks may be universal and updated.
As far as I am concerned, the two should be combined. On the one hand, the former provides us with a base for exploration. On the other hand, only through continuous practice can we promote the advances of knowledge. As students, while we are learning the textbook, we should value practice. Only in this way can we make ourselves learned and resourceful.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于议论文。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。本文有三点:有人认为书本知识重要;有人认为实践重要;自己的观点。2、要注意称谓的正确使用 ,本文以第三人称为主,表达个人观点一个用第一人称;3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;本文应该是一般现在时;4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如倒装句only through continuous practice can we promote the advances of knowledge. 和Only in this way can we make ourselves learned and resourceful.此外,文章还使用了convincing,reliable, On the one hand,On the other hand等。As far as I am concerned以及while等的使用使文章内容更具有 层次感,也使语言更加连贯。
【题目】书面表达
假设你叫李华,你的一位美国笔友Mary要到中山来,她想你介绍一下中山的情况.现在请你给她发封电子邮件,邮件必须包括以下内容:
位置 | 珠江三角洲南部 |
人口 | 约235万 |
面积 | 1800平方公里 |
历史 | 距今有800多年历史 |
著名的景点 | 石岐步行街,孙中山故居,民众水乡等. |
气候,天气 | 气候湿润,多雨;全年平均气温约摄氏22度. |
说明:开头和结尾已经给出,词数100字左右(the Pearl River Delta,珠江三角洲。Shiqi Shopping Street,石岐步行街。Doctor Sun Yatsen’s Former Residence,孙中山故居。Minzhong Water Village民众水乡)。
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to hear that you will come to Zhongshan for a visit.