Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder.. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 then 改when

 I后面加am

 attracts改attract

 colourfully改colourful或colorful

 stopped改 stop

 to改on

 去the

 their 改her

 which改that

 age 改ages

【解析】

试题分析：

 When是连词，连接时间状语从句

 系动词加介词构成系表结构

 主语是复数行驶，故谓语动词也用复数形式。

 后面是名词，前面使用形容词的形式

 本文是一般现在时，故使用动词原形

 固定词组fix one’s attention on        

 music是不可数名词，本句不要特指

 主语是she，这里用宾格her     

  It是形式主语，真正的主语是后面that引导的主语从句

 前面的different说明后面使用复数形式。

考点：考查短文纠错

点评：本文集中考查了在上下文中对语法的运用的改正的能力，要求考生细致耐心，特别注意单复数，和时态方面的问题。