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题目：Things Making Life Happy

要点：1. 不同人有不同的幸福观；

2. 我认为身体健康是幸福；

3. 但是，只有身体健康是不够的。

注意：1. 分三段书写；2，词数：100~120。

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Answer 1

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Things Making Life Happy

It’s believed that different people have different points of view on happiness. For instance, some people think that one is happy if one has many loyal friends and some people think that one enjoys one’s greatest happiness from one’s continuous success in one’s job.

How do I think about happiness? As far as I am concerned, to be healthy is one’s greatest happiness. As a proverb says, “A sound mind is in a sound body”. If one isn’t healthy, he will suffer both mentally and physically.

Health is a person’s happiness, but not wholeness. He ought to work for benefit of other people with the intelligence and health. Only by doing so can he be regarded as both a happy and a great person.

【解析】

 试题分析：首先要认真阅读前面的提示，看清写作要求，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文是议论文，用一般现在时。分三段阐述Things Making Life Happy。第一段：不同人有不同的幸福观。用It’s believed that different people have different points of view on happiness.总领全文。用some people…，some people…。具体说明不同的人有不同的幸福观。第二段：我个人的幸福感。其中引用的一句谚语A sound mind is in a sound body是一个亮点。还有As far as I am concerned 等短语的运用。 第三段写除了健康之外，还有聪慧和为他人着想。最后一句用倒装句Only by doing so can he be regarded as both a happy and a great person.用得很不错。

考点:提纲类作文。