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15.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said"How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried."Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

分析 本文主要讲述了小Tony在和父母去购物中心时走丢并重新找到父母的经历.

解答 One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.
Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into 
the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his 
parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and
 telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw∧parents.Mom said,
"How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried."Tony promised her that this
 would never happen again.
详解:
1.parent改为parents   考查名词的单复数    由于此处指的是 Tony 的父亲与母亲两个人,故用复数名词parents.
2.on改为in    考查介词    on:在…的上面;此处指的是:在商店的橱窗里,故用in.
3.去掉very   考查固定句型    so…that…意为:如此…以至于…,本句的意思是:他是如此喜欢它,以至于他迅速地走进了商店;故去掉much之前的very.
4.looks改为looking    考查现在分词    此处在句中作时间状语,由于动词look与其逻辑主语构成的是主谓关系,故用现在分词looking.
5.where改为that    考查宾语从句中的连词that的用法    此处用在动词found之后引导宾语从句,由于该从句中不缺少任何成分,应使用连词that;而连接代词where通常在宾语从句中作地点状语,故用that.
6.begun改为began    考查时态及语态     根据上下文都使用了一般过去时可知,此处描述的是过去发生的事情,由于动词begin与主语Tony构成的是主动关系;故用began.
7.telling改为told    考查动词的形式    此处与saw一起在句中作并列谓语,故二者在形式上应保持一致,故用told.
8.a改为the    考查冠词    此处表示特指上文提到的Tony 进去的那家商店,故用定冠词the.
9.parents前加his    考查人称代词   此处指代的是小男孩Tony的父母,故在parents前加his.
10.terrible改为terriblely   考查副词   此处在句中修饰形容词worried,故用副词terriblely.

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.

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