Question

阅读下面新闻,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didn’t offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou. Later he was proved to be a disabled person.

In a series of cases nationwide, we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transport, which seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.

People without morals (who don’t give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned, but they don’t deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values and not laws. In comparison, the attackers behave worse.

The attackers regard relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats. It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice, but can they still think of their personal intention when they call violent justice?

This “violent justice” can confuse many people and encourage them to do the same, especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood.

If cruel and rude acts are rooted in children’s hearts, society will never step into civilization. The practice violates common values, neither solving problems nor safeguarding civilized society.

1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点。

2. 以约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法,内容包括:

(1) 读完这则新闻,你有什么感受?

(2) 假如你是车上的一名乘客,你会怎样做?

(3) 就如何创建和谐社会提出你的建议。

1. 你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

The news is about a young disabled man who was slapped on a bus for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby, which leads to a debate about who is right and who is wrong.

I’m so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so impolite. It was wrong of her to get her justice with violence, which really will do great harm to our society.

Today in our society, many other people would take it for granted that they should be offered a seat on the crowded bus, as the morality requires. However, if I were a passenger on the crowded bus, I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability. So it is still a long way for us to build up a harmonious society. In my opinion, we should fight against the violent justice and try every means to stop it from happening so as to solve such kind of problems and safeguard our civilized society.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文是一个开放性作文，题文要求中含大量的英语信息，这加大了作文的难度。考生需首先读懂题文中的英文信息，然后对这件典型的事件进行约30词的概括，接着就这件事谈一下自己的看法（包括感受、假设你是当时车上的一员你会如何做、及对于创建和谐社会的建议。）写作时应注意详略得当，事件要简述，且谈自己的看法时要注意做到有条不紊。

亮点说明：本篇范文，要点准确全面、主次分明、重点突出。文章的时态使用准确，作者的遣词造句正确无误且颇显语言应用的功力。文中有大量的从句使用，例如定语从句“who was slapped on a bus for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby, which leads to a debate about who is right and who is wrong”，宾语从句“I’m so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so impolite.”，if虚拟条件句“ if I were a passenger on the crowded bus, I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability.”，这些从句水到渠成得使用使得文章行文紧凑且地道，成为文章极为突出的写作亮点。