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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。　　
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Dear Brad,
I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.
As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.
Li Hua

 

【答案】

1.ask—asked

2.the—a

3.Comparing---Compared

4.hard---harder

5.expensively—expensive

6.去掉marry后的with

7.Therefore—However

8.house---houses

9.we---us

10.offer后加to

【解析】

试题分析：做为80后的一员，作者在文中介绍了80后一代的处境，作者认为和父母相比，80后的生活更加不易，不仅工作难找， 房子买不起，而且很多女孩都希望嫁给有车有房的人，但是作者认为尽管处境艰难，人们还是要努力去创造自己美好的未来。

1.考查动词时态。In your last letter you askabout the post-80s 。从your last letter判断此句应该用一般过去时，所以把ask改为asked。

2.考查冠词用法。Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. 根据语境可知此处是泛指概念，句意：实际上，我就是属于这个群体的一个男孩，所以把the 改为a。

3.考查非谓语动词。Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. 从结构可知句子主语life和compare之间是动宾关系，所以把Comparing改为Compared。

4.考查形容词用法。life for us is getting much hard. 从上下文可知作者是用自己的生活与过去父母们的生活相比，应该用比较级，所以把hard改为harder。

5.考查形容词用法。The job market is tough and the houses expensively to afford。从结构可知houses后省略了be动词，所以应该用形容词，把expensively改为expensive。完整句子应该是the houses are expensive to afford。

6.考查动词用法。many girls prefer to marry with a man ，marry是及物动词，与某人结婚“marry sb”所以去掉marry后的with。

7.考查副词用法。Therefore, I don’t think love built on house ，从上下文可知此处是转折关系，所以把Therefore改为However。

8.考查名词单复数。I don’t think love built on house ，house是可数名词，根据句意判断此处应该用house的复数形式，所以把house改为houses。

9.考查代词用法。a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts ，介词of后跟宾语，所以应该用人称代词宾格，把we改为us。

10.考查动词不定式… are making great efforts live a good life，从语境可知live a good life 是make great efforts 的目的，所以在offer后加to。

考点：考查短文改错。

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增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

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