题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你校将举行“中国诗词朗诵”活动,外教Thomas J.对中国诗词非常感兴趣,请给他写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 活动时间、地点;
2. 活动意义。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Thomas J.,
I would like to invite you to the activity called “Reading and “Reciting Chinese Poetry”. It will be held in the school lecture hall from 3 p.m. to 5 p.m. next Friday. All the students and teachers are welcome to attend it.
We are very delighted to know that you are very interested in Chinese poetry. Reading and reciting Chinese poetry can not only help us to learn more Chinese culture but also helps us learn to write Chinese poems through the activity.
I would appreciate it if you could join us in the significant activity. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇是一篇电子邮件:你校将举行“中国诗词朗诵”活动,外教Thomas J.对中国诗词非常感兴趣,请给他写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:活动时间、地点;活动意义。
第2步:根据写作要求确定关键词,如:“Reading and “Reciting Chinese Poetry”(中国诗词朗诵);in the school lecture hall(学校演讲厅);join us in the significant activity(参加这有意义的活动)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】
本文是一封电子邮件,格式正确,内容符合要求,采用三段式,文中使用高级句子。I would like to invite you to the activity called “Reading and “Reciting Chinese Poetry”.过去分词做后置定语;It will be held in the school lecture hall from 3 p.m. to 5 p.m. next Friday.句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态;I would appreciate it if you could join us in the significant activity.使用固定句式I would appreciate it if---。