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【题目】假定你是李津,你的美国笔友Chris来信向你了解中医的有关情况。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。

(1) “中医有着悠久的历史,经过了数千年的实践和发展;

(2) “中医也是一门科学,它的优点正得到越来越广泛的认可;

(3) 你自己对中医的看法。

注意:(1)词数不少于 100

(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;

(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:中医” Traditional Chinese MedicineTCM

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Jin

【答案】Dear Chris,

I’m glad to hear from you. As a Chinese, I’m proud, knowing that you’re interested in Traditional Chinese Medicine. I’ll introduce it to you briefly.

First of all, as an important part of Chinese culture, TCM has a long history, which has undergone thousands of years of practice and development. In addition, TCM is also a science, and its advantages are being more and more widely recognized by people.

On my part, in contrast to western medicine, TCM is aimed at curing illness at source and helping people prevent from potential health problems. Moreover, people apply its unique diagnostic methods to medicine and gain remarkable effects, so I believe TCM will develop better. If you want to know more, you can write to me soon.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给美国笔友Chris,介绍有关“中医”的情况,要求表明“中医”的历史悠久、“中医”作为一门学科认可度愈来愈高和自己对“中医”的看法。

第一步:审题

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时

结构:总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求:1. “中医有着悠久的历史,经过了数千年的实践和发展;

2. “中医也是一门科学,它的优点正得到越来越广泛的认可;

3. 你自己对中医的看法。

第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

hear frombe interested inTraditional Chinese Medicineundergoin contrast toapply … to …diagnostic methods

第三步:连词成句

1. I’m glad to hear from you.

2. As a Chinese, I’m proud, knowing that you’re interested in Traditional Chinese Medicine.

3. TCM has a long history, which has undergone thousands of years of practice and development.

4. On my part, in contrast to western medicine, TCM is aimed at curing illness at source and helping people prevent from potential health problems.

5. Moreover, people apply its unique diagnostic methods to medicine and gain remarkable effects.

(根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)

第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not onlybut (also), including, also

3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat

4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,

6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7. 实:In fact, frankly speaking

8.表选择:either…or…or

连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

第五步:润色修改

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