Question

现在，越来越多的大陆游客可以赴台旅游，而日月潭作为台湾的主要景点，很多人并不真正了解，请按照以下要点提示，写一篇介绍日月潭（Sun Moon Lake）的英语短文,不少于110词。

1. 日月潭位于台湾的南投县，是台湾最著名的风景区，也是台湾最大的天然湖泊。

2. 湖中央有一岛屿把湖分成两部分，湖的东北部分圆圆的像太阳，而湖的西南部分弯弯的像月牙，故为日月潭。

3. 日月潭处在山地与西部平原之间，受3000万年前喜马拉雅（the Himalayas）造山运动的影响，由玉山（Mt.Yu）和阿里山（Mt.A-li）之间的断裂（ruptured）盆地积水而成。             

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Sample：                   Sun Moon Lake

Sun Moon Lake, located in Nantou County, Taiwan Province, is the largest natural lake as well as the most well-known scenic spot in Taiwan.

Do you know how its name came into being? In the middle of the lake is an island, which divides the lake into two parts. The northeastern part of the lake is round like the sun, while the southwestern part is shaped like the moon. So it is called “Sun Moon Lake”.

Between the mountainous region and the western plain lies Sun Moon Lake, which was greatly affected by the mountain-making movement of the Himalayas 30 million years ago. Besides, the constant water caused by the ruptured basins between Mt. A-li and Mt. Yu, created the present Sun Moon Lake.

It is such a wonderful place. Why not try a visit?

【解析】

试题分析：本文是关于台湾的旅游景点，属于提纲类作文，要求考生的要点要写全，不能有遗漏，在写作的时候用适当的连接词把句子串联起来，在选择词汇和词组的时候要选用高级的词汇和词组，以提升文章的整体层次，最重要的是要选用3-5个高级句型，如倒装句或者强调句等，让文章的句式充满变化。

考点：考查提纲类作文的写作

点评：提纲类作文的写作要注意不要遗漏要点，同时要用合适的连接词来连接全文，使之成为有机的整体。