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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下在写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

In my memory, my hometown was small village, but it was beautiful. When I was young, I was liked swimming in the river. The water was so clean that I could see fishes in them. As I missed my hometown, I go back home last week. Unlucky, I found the place in my memory was not like that it was. The water was dirt and the river was polluted so seriously! I couldn’t believe it. That beautiful hometown was destroyed by the pollutions. What a shame! I hope people can pay attention to protect the environment and make the beautiful hometown come back in life.

Answer 1

【答案】1. small前加a

2. liked前的was去掉

3. them→it

4. go→went

5. Unluck→Unluckily

6. that→what

7. dirt→dirty

8. pollutions→pollution

9. protect→protecting

10. in→to

【解析】记忆中的家乡是干净漂亮的，但现在被严重污染。作者呼吁人们保护环境，使家乡恢复昔日的美丽。

1. small前加a.考查冠词。句中village是单数可数名词，此处表示一个小村庄，故small前加a。

2. 去掉was.考查实义动词。句中like是实义动词，表示“喜欢”，在句中作谓语动词用过去时，而was liked是被动语态，此处并不表被动，故去掉was。

3. them→it.考查代词。此处代指The water，是不可数名词，用it代替。故them改为it。

4. go→went.考查时态。根据句中时间状语last week可知，用过去时，故go改为went。

5. Unlucky→Unluckily.考查副词。此处单独作状语修饰整个句子要用副词，故Unlucky改为Unluckily。

6. that→what.考查宾语从句。介词like后是宾语从句，其中what在宾语从句中作表语，指它是什么样子，故that改为what。

7. dirt→dirty.考查形容词。此处是形容词作表语，指水是脏的。故dirt改为dirty。

8. pollutions→pollution.考查名词。pollution意为“污染”是不可数名词，没有复数。故pollutions改为pollution。

9. protect→protecting.考查动词形式。句中pay attention to中的to是介词，后加动词的-ing形式作宾语，故protect改为protecting。

10. in→to.考查固定短语。come back to life意为“复活，恢复活力”，是固定短语，介词用to不用in，故in改为to。