Question

4．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom 几天前给你发来电子邮件，询问你的寒假生活情况，请根据以下要点给他回一封邮件：
1．感谢Tom 的来信；
2．假期生活总体情况介绍；
3．假期中最大的收获和遗憾．
注意：1．词数120-150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于开放类的书信作文．文中要点只提到了大体的提纲，并没有具体的内容，考生可灵活发挥想象来完成作文，只要符合其中的三个要点即可：感谢来信；假期生活总体情况及收获和遗憾．审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称．
重要短语：
did sb good both mentally and physically对某人身心健康都有益；be busy doing sth忙于做某事；give sth a thorough cleaning彻底打扫…；pay a visit to参观某地；benefit sb from sth使某人从…中受益．
高分句型：
1．Short as it was，the winter vacation did me some good both mentally and physically．本句为as引导的让步状语从句用的倒装用法，其中本句中倒装的是表语short．
2．I felt very happy to see the smile on their faces when we sang and told jokes．这是when引导的时间状语从句．
3．What benefitted me most from the vacation is that I had a really good rest．本句中的主语为what引导的主语从句，后面的that引导的是一个表语从句．

解答 Dear Tom，
  I'm writing to tell you something about how I enjoyed my winter vacation．（写信目的）
   Short as it was，the winter vacation did me some good both mentally and physically．（高分句型）On the first few days，I was busy giving our flat a thorough cleaning to welcome the Spring Festival．I also paid a visit to the nearby nursing home with my classmates．I felt very happy to see the smile on their faces when we sang and told jokes．（高分句型）I also went on a trip along with my parents to Hainan．We had great fun appreciating the sunset there．（假期活动）
   What benefitted me most from the vacation is that I had a really good rest．（高分句型）What regrets most was that I did not work hard at my lessons before．Now I'm going all out for the coming entrance exam．（个人感受）
  What about your winter vacation？I'm looking forward to your early reply．
  Yours
  Li Hua

点评 考生不能遗漏要点要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数．考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．