题目内容
11.假设你是李华,受邀参加中美文化节(the Sino-America Culture Festival),请你作为我校学生代表,给负责人Clark先生写一封信,希望届时他能给你机会,在文化节上向大家介绍中国某位杰出人物,简述该名人的生平和主要成就,并表达对该名人的看法.注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
参考词汇:名人:celebrity
Dear Clark,
I am Li Hua,a student from China.We highly treasure the chance to take part in the Sino-America Culture Festival.I expect you to allow me to recommend at the festival an outstanding Chinese celebrity-Deng Xiaoping.
Deng was the son of a farmer,but he grew up to be a remarkable political leader,and one of the greatest founders of the PRC.With his wisdom and love towards his country and people,he changed billions of working people's lives through his efforts.He is a pride not only to the Chinese,but also to the whole world.What an extraordinary person!
On behalf of our school,I sincerely wish the festival a great success!
Best wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua.
分析 这是写给中美文化节负责人Clark先生一封信.根据题目要求可知用第一人称,用一般现在时态介绍自己的要求,用一般过去时态介绍邓小平.内容包括:一自我介绍并且提出请求;二介绍邓小平的生平和主要成就,并表达对他的看法;三表达祝愿.
高分句型:
1.I expect you to allow me to recommend at the festival an outstanding Chinese celebrity-Deng Xiaoping.句子里allow me to 表示"允许我去做某事"; recommend 表示"推荐,介绍";an outstanding Chinese celebrity表示"一位中国杰出的人物",它和Deng Xiaoping是同位语的关系.
我希望你能允许我在文化节上向大家介绍中国杰出人物--邓小平.
2.With his wisdom and love towards his country and people,he changed billions of working people's lives through his efforts.句子里With his wisdom and love towards his country and people,是With的复合结构做状语; through his efforts表示"通过他的努力".
因为他的睿智和对祖国和人民的爱,他通过努力改变了数十亿人民的生活.
解答 Dear Clark,
I am Li Hua,a student from China.We highly treasure the chance to take part in the Sino-America Culture Festival.I expect you to allow me to recommend at the festival an outstanding Chinese celebrity-Deng Xiaoping.【高分句型一】(自我介绍并且提出请求)
Deng was the son of a farmer,but he grew up to be a remarkable political leader,and one of the greatest founders of the PRC.With his wisdom and love towards his country and people,he changed billions of working people's lives through his efforts.【高分句型】He is a pride not only to the Chinese,but also to the whole world.What an extraordinary person!(介绍邓小平的生平和主要成就,并表达对他的看法.)
On behalf of our school,I sincerely wish the festival a great success!(表达祝愿)
Best wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
点评 考查开放类作文.
开放类作文题材涉及广泛,如人物介绍、地点介绍、新闻报道、生活话题及社会热门话题,试题设计真实性高,符合学生的认知水平,其中学校生活类题材占比例最大.体裁多种多样,包括应用文(书信、日记、通知、发言稿、寻物及招领启事等)、说明文、记叙文、议论文等.
In this unique experiment,five Chinese teachers took over a British classroom with 50teenagers aged 13and 14in a British school for one month and taught them in a typical Chinese way:no talking,no questions and experiencing the severe classroom discipline within an extended school-hour from 7a.m.to 7p.m.In the meantime,another group of students were guided in the British teaching style:free talking,free questioning,thinking for themselves and relaxing learning atmosphere.
At the end of the documentary,all the pupils took part in the same exams in a few subjects.Next is the result.
Mathematics | Chinese | Science | |
Chinese style | 67.74 | 46.88 | 58.33 |
British style | 54.84 | 36.46 | 50 |
【写作内容】
假设英国教育部长正在向中国学生征询对上述建议的看法,请你给他写封信表达你的看法.
1.用约30个单词完成上文的概要.
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,你应该
(1)阐述你对"英国教育该不该采用中国方式"的看法;
(2)用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的观点.
【写作要求】
1.写作时不能直接引用原文语句.
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当.
Dear Minister,
I hear that many people in your country are suggesting Britain's education system should follow China's after a BBC documentary,which reported a 4-week experiment ending up with Chinese teaching methods defeating British ones..It is said you are collecting opinions from Chinese students.The following is my view.
Personally,I strongly advise you forget Chinese style of education.On one hand,Chinese students wining in test scores is in fact at the cost of their creative abilities and autonomy in learning.As a matter of fact,many of my classmates could do nothing without teachers'and parents'help,let alone make great innovations in their later life.On the other hand,Chinese students are suffering from a severe lack of sleep and good health,all due to the pursuit of a high score in numerous tests.Without a healthy body,nothing is meaningful.Do you really want young Britons to spend 15 to 16 hours a day on study?
Therefore,dear Minister,you should think twice if you decide to follow that suggestion.
Your sincerely,
A Chinese senior student.