Question

你的笔友Bob将从加拿大来长沙看你。你将和你的好友林涛一起陪同Bob在长沙度假。现请你给Bob写一封电子邮件，介绍你的好友林涛。林涛的具体信息见下面表格,你可以选择你认为最重要的三至五个信息进行介绍。 

要求：1.词数：100-120词；  2.请不要用真实姓名。

Name	Lin Tao; David (English name)
Basic Facts	boy; 16 years old; from Changsha; studies in SDFZ
Characteristics	mild, curious, and optimistic
Favorite subjects	Maths, Chemistry and English
Hobbies	football, reading and travelling
Dreams	study for a PhD and work for a research organization
Special experiences	took part in a scientific research program on virus and won the status of candidate to Peking University

 

Re: Bob (Bobhappy@163.com)

Subject: Recommend a friend

Love! Yours

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bob，

How are you? Your email reached me with pleasure yesterday. I am excited that you are coming to Changsha to spend this winter vacation. Now, I’d like to introduce a good friend of mine, Lin Tao, who will accompany us during the holiday.

Lin Tao is a classmate of mine who is from Changsha, so he knows lots of interesting places here. Besides, he is a bright boy with rich knowledge, since he is always curious to discover the unknown, which earns him good performances in study. The most coincident thing is that he has the same dream as you do---to study for a PhD and work for a research organization. And I think you must be excited to know his experiences of winning the status of candidate to Peking University!

I’m sure we three will have a wonderful winter vacation in Changsha. Write to me when you are free.

CU soon!

【解析】

试题分析：考查表格类作文的写作。这是一篇书信，介绍介绍你的好友林涛。林涛的具体信息是以表格的形式给出，而且是用英语给出，考点只需要适当串联即可，在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体，同时要注意使用英语句型如I am excited that you are coming to Changsha to spend this winter vacation.等结构，也要使用倒装句，定语从句等特殊的句式来提高文章的多样性。如he is a bright boy with rich knowledge, since he is always curious to discover the unknown, which earns him good performances in study.等

考点：考查表格类作文的写作

点评：本文属于表格类作文，此类作文虽然好写，但是要写出特色是很不容易的。关键是要点要全面覆盖，不能有遗漏和省略。写作的时候运用多种表达方式，让句子有变化。