Question

11．Responsibility is one of the most treasured traditional values in China．The children are taught to be responsible when they are very young．At schools，the students are also instructed to be responsible．
In fact，responsibility can be understood in many ways．For parents，they have had the responsibility for caring for and fostering their children since the birth of their babies； for teachers，both in kindergartens and colleges，they also should be responsible for the study and life of their students，that is to say，teachers are the second parents of children to some extent； for us，to promote a better relationship with our friends，we bear the responsibility for helping our friends when they are in trouble or faced with difficulties．
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120个词就"责任心"谈谈你的认识，内容包括：
（1）责任心的重要性，并举例说明缺乏责任心的影响．
（2）你认为该如何做一个有责任心的中学生？
注意：
1．可以用自己亲身的经历、虚构的故事或生活中的事例，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名．

Answer 1

分析 本文为读写任务作文．
写作主题为：责任心
文段通过家庭责任，学校责任，个人的责任来说明"责任心"是中华民族的传统价值观之一．
写作要点为：1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120个词就"责任心"谈谈你的认识，内容包括：
（1）责任心的重要性，并举例说明缺乏责任心的影响．
（2）你认为该如何做一个有责任心的中学生？

解答 The passage mainly tells us that we Chinese put high value on responsibility and that people have different responsibility depending on their roles．
Responsibility is essential to our life．Being responsible，you will gain many precious things，such as true love．Without responsibility，however，you'll be an annoyance and can't achieve what you desire．For example，some students don't work hard or even skip classes．Worse still，some are so weak in controlling themselves that they are often addicted to the Internet，which has negative effects on their study．
As students，we ought to be responsible for whatever we do．Above all，great efforts should be made to improve our study and repay the love and care of our parents and teachers．Besides，we must develop a strong sense of responsibility，such as helping others in trouble．Only when we are responsible will we be respected and loved by others．（150words）

点评 考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．