Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写出改加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在改词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My friend Julie had been trying to lose weight for years. She was so afraid of being laughed by others that she went on one diet after others, but none of them real worked. She felt sad and hopeless about herself. I encouraged her to turn to his doctor for help. Finally, she followed her doctor's advices and began to eat a simple and balanced diet. She eats fruits and vegetables and avoided high-fat food. In addition, she joined an exercise class. She worked out three times a week. At the first, she felt tired. But encouraging by her friends, she chose to stick to it and eventually she reached her goal. Best of all, she is able to stay at her ideal weight now. That is why she has developed health habits in her daily life.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】laughed后加at

【2】第二个others为 another

【3】改real为really

【4】改his为her

【5】改advices为advice

【6】改eats为ate

【7】去掉the

【8】改encouraging为encouraged

【9】改why为because

【10】改health为healthy

【解析】

【1】laughed后加at 考查动词短语。Laugh at 嘲笑；

【2】第二个others为 another 考查代词。One after another一个接一个；

【3】改real为really 考查副词。句意：但没有一个人真正的工作；

【4】改his为her 考查代词。句意：我鼓励她向医生救助。根据上文提到She was so afraid of being laughed by others可知是女性；

【5】改advices为advice 考查名词。Advice是不可数名词。

【6】改eats为ate 考查动词的时态。根据上一句话提到Finally, she followed her doctor's advices and began to eat a simple and balanced diet.可知用一般过去时；

【7】去掉the 考查冠词。At first 首先；

【8】改encouraging为encouraged 考查非谓语动词。句意：但受到她朋友的鼓励，她坚持了下来最终达到目标。

【9】改why为because 考查表语从句。句意：这就是因为她在日常生活中养成的健康习惯。

【10】改health为healthy 考查形容词。Healthy habit健康的习惯。

考点 ：短文改错。