Question

【题目】你所在学校的英文校刊向全体高一学生征稿，主题是"我的高一生活"，你有意参加此次活动．请根据下列要点完成一篇英语作文．
1)．从进入高中至今，你的经历和感受；
2)．你对即将进入高中的学生们的建议．
注意：1)．词数100以上；
2)．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3)．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称

Answer 1

【答案】Last September，I entered my high school．The moment I stepped into the campus，I could feel something amazing was happening．Actually，my new school life was more than expect．I met my friendly classmates and lots of excellent teachers．It's like my ideal daydream came into reality．

I studied much harder than in junior middle school because I knew there's a bigger challenge waiting for me．And I also joined in a variety of after﹣school activities which cultivated my all﹣sided abilities．I didn't stop struggling for my goal in every single day though there was ups and downs．To my satisfaction，my efforts was paid back．I have seen my gradual growth and development in the past year．My first high school year can be a cornerstone of the future success．

I really like to share my experience with the new comers to help them adapt to their new lives in high school．I suggest that they make proper plans to make sure that no time will be wasted．And I also think they should better learn to make a balance between study and after-school activities．

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文,写作要点已经给出，内容包括：1)．从进入高中至今，你的经历和感受；2)．你对即将进入高中的学生们的建议。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.由于主题是"我的高一生活"，活动发生在过去为了介绍这项活动，所以通篇的主要时态为一般过去时。2. 文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。3.要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What's more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。