Question

【题目】下面图片描绘了中国成语“凿壁借光”的故事，请按要求写一篇词数为100字左右的短文。

内容要求：

1. 描述画面情景。

2. 分析故事中的寓意。

参考词汇 寓意 moral n.

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Answer 1

【答案】In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he ‘steal’ light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is: we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

【解析】

这是一篇看图写作。要求根据图片描绘中国成语“凿壁借光”的故事。

第一步：审题

体裁：看图写作

时态：根据图片，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 描述画面情景。

2. 分析故事中的寓意。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

a pile of books, in a shabby clothes, come in through a hole, be absorbed in, well-known story, can’t afford the school fee, spare no effort., acquire knowledge,

第三步：连词成句

A boy in a shabby clothes is reading with a pile of books.

A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall.

He was absorbed in his reading.

It is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.

The boy couldn’t afford even a candle,

We should spare no effort to acquire knowledge.

We should never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

用现在分词作伴随状语：We can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.

使用并列连词连接句子：A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

使用并列句，同时用让步状语从句：We should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改