Question

7．你校的外教Thomas想了解刚刚结束的英语口语培训班效果，以便制定下一步的培训计划．假如你是李明，是该培训班的学员，想再参加写作培训，请按照所给提示用英语给Thomas 写一封电子邮件．
1．说明收获2．表达谢意3．提出建议或要求
注意：1．词数：100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．邮件的开关和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一封书信，属于应用文格式．要求以李明的口吻给外教Thomas写信，告知本次培训班的收获，并提出建议和要求．所以要使用第一人称，在描述过去这一次培训时，使用一般过去时．在提出建议或者要求时可以使用一般将来时．
要点：1．说明收获．口语得到提高，并交到新朋友；
2．表示感谢，希望对方能够再次开设这样的培训班；
3．提出建议或者要求：建议对方增加写作方面的培训．

重点词汇与短语：
1．owing to 由于
2．smooth away 摆平
3．benefit from 受益于

高分句型
 1．My spoken English has greatly improved owing to the effective training programe，during which I made many new friends．
 during which引导的非限制性定语从句，是提分的句型．
表示地点，时间和原因的"介词+which"分别相当于 where，when，why．
I'll never forget the day on which/when I joined the League．
I know a wood in which/where you can find roses．
Is there any reason for which/why you should have a holiday？

2．When staying with my classmates，I tried to communicate with them in English，
When staying 作时间状语，因为stay的逻辑主语和主句的主语是一致的，故用现在分词．
谓语动作发生在分词所表示的动作过程之中，则用when/while+现在分词的一般式，分词的逻辑主语为句中的主语．此种情况可以用in+动名词的一般式代替．
也可以换作when、while引导的时间状语从句，该从句的谓语动词用进行时态．如：
Don't be careless when/while having an exam．=Don't be careless in having an exam．=Don't be careless when/while you are having an exam．考试时不要粗心．

3．Whenever I met with native speakers，I had a strong willing to practise English，but I wasn't brave enough to open my mouth，which worried me for a long time．
Whenever引导时间状语从句，but连接的转折句，which引导的非限制性定语从句．
Whenever引导让步状语从句，表示"无论何时"，相当于 at whatever time，no matter when等．如：
Whenever I see him，he's reading．我无论什么时候看到他，他都在看书．
Whenever I go to London I try to see Vieky．无论我什么时候去伦敦，都设法去看看维基．
Whenever you come，you are welcome．你什么时候来，我们都欢迎．

解答 Dear Thomas，
    I'm so thankful to you for your kindness and help in the oral English training course．My spoken English has greatly improved owing to the effective training programe，during which I made many new friends．（高分句型）（表达谢意与说明收获）
    I used to be shy and un-talkative．When staying with my classmates，I tried to communicate with them in English，but I often made mistakes．（高分句型） Whenever I met with native speakers，I had a strong willing to practise English，but I wasn't brave enough to open my mouth，which worried me for a long time．（高分句型） Luckily enough，your training course smoothed away all the difficulties．I have benefited from it．
Now，I'm glad to learn you are to organize more training courses，and I hope I can get your advice on how to improve my writing．In short，I'm looking forward to more new things in our future courses．
Yours sincerely，（提出建议或要求）
Li Ming

点评 完成本文时要充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．