Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
One day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English.
I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior
students were better than me. I asked them for advise and they told me to practise more on QQ.
But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I
learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even
communicate some college students freely.

Answer 1

【答案】there改为where；surprised改为surprise；were改为was；me改为mine；advise改为advice；But改为So；practise改为 practicing；learn为及物动词，后直接加宾语，不需要介词，去掉from；With改为As；在some前面加with
【解析】①where引导地点状语从句。
②to one’s surprise意为“令某人吃惊的是”，为固定搭配。
③主语是the oral English，谓语动词应使用单数形式。
④better than后的内容应是my oral English，用形容词性物主代词代替my oral English。
⑤advise为动词，此处应使用名词advice。ask sb. for advice意为“向某人征求建议”。
⑥前后句子之间是因果关系，应使用表示因果的连词。
⑦spend sometime doing sth.为固定搭配。
⑧learn为及物动词，后直接加宾语，不需要介词。
⑨as time went by意为“随着时间的流逝”。
⑩communicate with sb.意为“与某人交流”。