Question

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Not everyone is lucky. We should express sympathy（n.同情）for the persons who are unlucky, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place.

注意：① 无需写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

② 除诗歌外，文体不限；

③ 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

④ 词数为120左右。

Answer 1

In our daily life, no matter who is unfortunate, we should show sympathy for him and do our best to help him.

Last month, Wang Lin, who is one of my classmates, suddenly fell ill and was in urgent need of an operation. However, his family was too poor to afford the expenses. Many teachers and classmates donated some money to him and he was operated on in time. In addition, we looked after him in turn when he was in hospital. With us tending him, he recovered quickly.

As long as everyone can express sympathy and love for the unfortunate, our society will be a better place for us to live in.

【解析】

试题解析：对于此类短文写作，应注意措辞得体，时态正确。题目已经给大致内容，写作时要注意适当增加内容，以保证文章的连贯性。【亮点说明】：第一段第一句In our daily life, no matter who is unfortunate, we should show sympathy for him and do our best to help him. 使用no matter who句式做插入语，使句子生动贴切，强调所表达内容；do one’s best to do sth 为固定短语，表示尽最大努力做某事。第二段第一句Last month, Wang Lin, who is one of my classmates, suddenly fell ill and was in urgent need of an operation.十分精彩，就用一个定语从句就表达出了Wang Lin近况，显示作者娴熟的技巧。第二段第五句With us tending him, he recovered quickly. 使用独立主格，结构为with+名词+v-ing，显示出作者深厚功底。第三段第一句As long as everyone can express sympathy and love for the unfortunate, our society will be a better place for us to live in. 使用as long as 引导条件状语从句，明确表示出作者对未来的希冀和美好愿望。短语的运用也十分出彩，fall ill生病, in need of需要，too…to…太…而不能…,look after照顾, in turn轮流等使用也为文章添色不少。However, in addition等词的使用文章条理清晰、结构紧凑。总结：写作时要学会将多个简单句合并成一个复杂句，多使用不同的句式。

考点：考查短文写作。