题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Tony计划在元宵节期间到中国旅游,特写信向你询问相关信息,以便更好体验中国传统文化。请你给他写封回信,内容包括:
1. 节日时间;
2. 传统活动。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:元宵节the Lantern Festival;阴历的Lunar。
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【答案】Dear Tony,
I’m writing to tell you something about the Lantern Festival in China. Widely known as a traditional big event, the festival falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month to celebrate the end of the Spring Festival as well as the family union. Generally, apart from eating yuanxiao, the typical snack for the festival, there will be a grand lantern fair where we can enjoy countless eye-catching lanterns and guess various mind-consuming riddles. I bet your visit will never fail to impress you with the charm of Chinese traditional culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇考察的作文类型是介绍信。要求考生给朋友写信介绍元宵节的时间和庆祝活动。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构:总分
要求:
1. 表明写信目的
2.
1)元宵节的时间
2)元宵节有哪些庆祝活动
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be known as/ celebrate/ a variety of/ leave an impression on sb/ be interested in/ traditional festival
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to tell you something about the Lantern Festival in China.
2. Widely known as a traditional big event, the festival falls on the 15th day of the first lunar month to celebrate the end of the Spring Festival as well as the family union.
3. Generally, apart from eating yuanxiao, the typical snack for the festival, there will be a grand lantern fair
4. We can enjoy countless eye-catching lanterns and guess various mind-consuming riddles.
5. I bet your visit will never fail to impress you with the charm of Chinese traditional culture.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【高分句型】
There are varieties of activities on the special day, such as eating yuanxiao, flying kongming lantern and so on, among which the grand lantern fair is the most interesting, providing us with great fun. among which…是介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句