Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意:        1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

                      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it. She painted careful and her works were nice. She first painted only to please oneself, and then began to sell her works with a little money. In 1993, a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work hanging in a shop. He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less. Caldor held a show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists. Grandma Moses, who was world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961，at the age of 101.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 before→after

 careful→carefully

 oneself→herself

 with→for

 happen→happened,

 work→works

 buying →bought,

 less →more

 Moses和other间，加to

 was died→was

【解析】

试题分析：摩斯奶奶在她学绘画后不久就对画画痴迷起来。她画地非常仔细，而且作品也非常好。她开始绘画的时候只是为了自娱自乐，但是后来一位收藏家碰巧发现了她的作品，便立刻买下了她全部的作品。后来他为了介绍摩斯奶奶的作品而专门办了一次画展。

 考查连词。soon before she picked it up 由上下文可知她是在学画画之后才会对绘画变得着迷上瘾，故把before改成after。

 考查副词。She painted carefu。修饰动词应该用副词，所以把careful改成carefully。

 考查不定代词。She first painted only to please oneself,。oneself要随着主语变化，所以把oneself改成herself。

 考查介词。and then began to sell her works with a little money，固定短语：sell sth for some money“某物卖了多少钱”，故把 with改成for。

 考查动词时态。Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work，文章背景是过去时态，所以把 happen改成happened，

 考查名词单复数。several of Grandma Moses’ work。由语境可知此处work表示作品，应该用复数形式，故把work改成works。

 考查谓语动词。He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less 此处表示三个连续的动作，所以把buying 改成bought。

 考查不定代词set out to look for less。由语境可知此处表示“更多”的意思，故把less 改成more。

 考查固定短语。introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists。introduce sth to sb“把……介绍给某人”，故在 Moses和other间，加介词to。

 考查谓语动词。who was world-famous, was died on December。die是不及物动词，不用被动形式，所以把die前面的was去掉。

考点：考查短文改错。