题目内容
Dear editor,
In the past my hometown was used to be beautiful place. 1.________
Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In 2.________
order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down 3.________
more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was 4.________
almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into 5.________
wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from 6.________
which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should 7.________
realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. 8.________
What’s more, they should take good care of the forests and plant 9.________
trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions. 10.________
解析:
1.去掉was,used to do意为“过去曾经一直做某事”。 2.去掉第一个in,everywhere本身就是一个副词,可作地点状语,in是介词,后接名词。 3.house改为houses,应该是“许多间房子”而不是“一间房子”。 4.went改为going,with是介词,后接名词、代词、动名词而不是句子。 5.√。 6.struck改为strike,由于这句话是在叙述一个事实,故动词应用一般现在时态。 7.However改为So,本句与上文的关系应是因果关系而不是转折关系。 8.terribly改为terrible,形容词修饰名词,但terribly是副词,不能修饰名词。 9.they改为we,文章一直用的是第一人称,故此处改为we。 10.instead后加of, instead of是固定搭配。
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