Question

假定你是李华，看到班上有部分同学在完成作业时，不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业，针对这种现象，请你以My opinion on copying others’ homework为题谈谈你自己的看法。

注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

      2. 短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数：

3.词数： 150字左右。

主要原因	作业量大，偏难
	对功课不感兴趣，懒惰
	完成任务，取悦老师
危害及解决办法	抄袭不对，违反校规
	要诚实，勤奋学习
	有困难可请教同学和老师
个人看法	------

Answer 1

 My opinion on copying others’ homework

It is known to us all that some students copy others' homework. On one hand, we students have to do a large amount of homework both at home and at school. It is also true that sometimes we have some problems which are too difficult for us to work out. On the other hand, lazy and uninterested in their lessons, some students copy others’ homework both to finish the assignments and please their teachers.

In a word, copying others’ homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it’s against the rules of the school. We should be honest and work hard to achieve high grades. If we have difficulties, we can turn to our teachers and our classmates for help. For another, copying others’ homework too often, we will lose the ability that can help us to think.

As far as I’m concerned, it’s for our own sake to study. We should do our best to gain knowledge. Let’s do our bit to prevent such bad behavior from spreading.

解析:

根据表格将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感；要用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然。写出内涵意思，本文最大的特点就是想象力十分丰富，文章要有血有肉，无论是长短句的搭配，还是从句的使用，都要做到恰当。