Question

书面表达

高中学习生涯即将结束，你校高三年级拟举行一次有关“感恩”的英文演讲比赛。请根据以下要点写一篇120词左以的演讲稿。

要点：

1．感恩对象；

2．为何感恩；

3．如何用实际行动表达自己的感恩之情。

注意：

1．只能选择一个感恩的对象，如家人、老师、朋友等；

2．可对所给要点做适当发挥：

3．演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名；

4．开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　Good afternoon, everyone!It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today．The topic of my speech is“Thank you, __________________”．

______________________________________________

Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Possible Version 1 　　Good afternoon, everyone!It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today．The topic of my speech is“Thank you, mum”． 　　Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love．My mum is an ordinary house-wife．I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during these stressful days．In these days, she keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as cozy as possible．On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up．I'm fortunate to have such a caring mother． 　　Listen, time is clicking．The big exam is there for me and you, every son and daughtel, to realize dreams．I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our dear mums．I have another message for everyone here：Express your love in return．Either a small talk with mom or a cup of tea for her will shine her through． 　　Thank you for listening． 　　Possible Version 2 　　Good afternoon, everyone!It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today．The topic of my speech is“Thank you, all my dear teachers”． 　　How time flies!The memory of the first day still stays fresh in my mind when we were packed with a lot of luggage and filled with curiosity about the life in Senior High School． 　　Thanks for all that you've done to us in these three years．It is you who open up our eyes and ignite our thirst for knowledge．When we are depressed by a difficult task or a conflict with our peers, it is you who come to us and guide us to be more open-minded．When we get bored with the tight schedule, it is your humor that fills our class with laughter． 　　In about one month we will head for our future college life．We will bear in mind your words of wisdom and be determined to be a role model and a positive influence like you． 　　Thank you for listening． 　　评分原则： 　　按参考答案给分，如果出现与参考答案不同，但符合题目要求的答案也可以接受，具体由阅卷点裁定。 　　一、评分原则 　　1．本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 　　2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 　　3．词数少于100和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。 　　4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 　　5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 　　6．如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 　　二、内容要点 　　1．感恩的对象(只能选择一个) 　　2．感恩的理由 　　3．如何用实际行动表达自己的感恩之情