Question

【题目】假如你是遵义航天高级中学的高二学生李华，寒假参加了为期两周的“英国夏令营”活动。在这两周里，你住在Simon家中，他为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。现在请你写一封邮件感谢他。内容需包括以下要点：

1，感谢Simon的帮助。

2，自己的感受和收获。

注意：词数100词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Simon,

Hello! How time flies! I have already returned to China for nearly two months. But it is still wonderful for me to recall the pleasant experience during the two-week England Summer Camp in the UK.

Firstly and most importantly, I want to express my gratitude to you when I think of the wonderful two weeks in UK. It is your considerate arrangement that makes it convenient and comfortable for me to live, study and travel in UK.

Furthermore, I have learned a lot, not just of the English language but also of your diverse culture. What impresses me most is your hospitality and humour, and so does your delicious traditional food. Last but not least, the scenery there is definitely gorgeous.

Hardly can any word express my appreciation for your kindness and help. I do faithfully hope you can pay a visit to China soon. And I hope we can keep in touch.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇信件类作文，信件需要包含的内容已经给出。我们所要做的就是用正确的句子简要描述题目中给出的内容，注意所有的信息都要包括，不要有遗漏。本作文中给出的要点比较简略, 可以自由发挥，使上下文连贯。需要注意不要偏离文章中心，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百左右。