Question

1．假设你即将参加你校主题为"Preparing Myself for College Life"的英语演讲比赛．请用英文写一则简短的演讲稿，内容包括对大学生活的构想和你打算怎么做来适应大学生活．
要求：1、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
2、合理发挥想像力，适当增加内容；
3、字数：120字左右．
Hello，everyone，
My college life is right at the door and I am getting ready for it．
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That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
So attractive college life will be that（1）I would improve my abilities in all aspects rather than（2）just sit in the classroom studying（3）．大学生活如此吸引人，我宁愿提高我各方面的能力而非仅仅坐在教室里学习．
（1）so/such…that…（如此…以致…）引导结果状语从句，so 和such提到句首，倒装；
（2）would do…rather than do…（宁愿…而不…），表达强烈的意愿．
（3）studying是现在分词做伴随状语，书面表达中运用分词做状语总是吸引眼球的亮点．
句型二：
I have a strong belief that（1）we are bound to （2）enjoy a colorful college life  as long as （3）we are well prepared．我坚信只要我们做好充分准备就必然会享受多彩的大学生活．
（1）that引导了同位语从句，说明belief的内容．
（2）be bound to do注定…，必然…，增强语言气势．
（3）as long as 只要…，增强语言的气势，情感色彩强烈．

解答 Hello，everyone．
My college life is right around the corner and I am getting ready for it（点明主题）．
So attractive college life will be that I would improve my abilities in all aspects rather than just sit in the classroom studying【高分句型一】（大学生活的构想）．Therefore，in order to get used to college life as soon as possible，I should prepare myself for that from now on（决定为大学生活做准备）．
To start with，I intend to set new goals in order to be successful in college．Second，learning to be independent is essential for me．Last but not least，I'll try to get along well with my new classmates because friends are always important具体做法）．
I have a strong belief that we are bound to enjoy a colorful college life as long as we are well prepared【高分句型二】
（总结--表达信心和决心）．

That's all．Thank you!

点评 写作时首先审题要到位：审体裁、人称和时态；审要点，根据题目的要求审要点．其次要考虑高级词语和句型的选用，词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．